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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
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    Did the MC forget about the letter that he was going to send to the heroine's relative or how?

    Ch 93 Black Castle in Qianwei Town
    Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist
    Eastern · Evil_Villain
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    haaaaa am I the only one who anxiously awaits that they already know the truth?

    Ch 649 Garden of words
    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    leave it and he asked me if Steven is going to be born...umm it would be interesting if he was born but at the same time I don't want Nasca...

    Ch 7 Chapter 7
    Kryptonite in steven universe
    Others · Universal_01
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    everyone has the sin of laziness and I also don't want the woman who sleeps with the MC to be someone else's girl or someone else touched her.

    Ch 17 CHAPTER 17: A Great Banquet*
    Old Man Cultivator with Sex System
    Fantasy · SimpIF
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Posted

    It is a very good read, villainous, powerful MC, lemons, non-irritating system or with a human conscience, now as it is a very good novel, the most likely thing to happen is: The author gets sick, has an accident, one of his relatives dies or is sick, falls into depression, has no motivation, takes a break to study, changes jobs and pauses to "get used to" to Don't come back, you know the typical thing that ruins a very good read...

    Old Man Cultivator with Sex System
    Fantasy · SimpIF
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    a good chapter to be a rushed chapter although it cut

    Ch 27 Creating A Yandere 4
    Ancient Hypnosis
    Fantasy · Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    ok in this chapter the MC acted very beta, nervous and such

    Ch 16 16 – Some Gifts
    Moved for WN Contest (Check Synopsis)
    Games · Gaasuja
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    atg (against the gods)

    Ch 8 New Old Man Hentai fics to write
    Douluo Dalu: Hentai
    Anime & Comics · Doldman116
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    Aizen is practically telling Yoruichi that it's okay for him to have love with another woman? disgusting that Yuri, and I thought that Aizen was possessive, what a deception

    Ch 10 Chapter 10 R-18+
    DxD: Issei's Conquest of Sex 18+
    Anime & Comics · dxd_no_hentai
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    hahahaha I don't know where they see him dominated, because I see the MC as very weak compared to other MCs or powerful enemies, I'm telling you, you were doing very well but when the witch suddenly came out he changed

    Ch 2 Announcement 2
    Marvel : Path to Singularity (Rewrite)
    Movies · S_Pandey_0170
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    What happened when they met? He saved her, he must have seen how human beings are.

    Ch 20 Chapter: 20
    God of Contract
    Anime & Comics · meatball_san
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Posted

    ok, I will write my review honestly as a reader, I do not care if it is done for fun, with the purpose of being animated or something else, I will write it based on my opinion, to start I start by saying that He hated character development, naive, retarded, chicken, dense MCs and the NTR, so:Point number 1 the MC has a below average intelligence, he feels very childish, he tells him the things he said like that friend that we can all clearly see what is stupid, he does not use Fully your system. Point number 2, you are indirectly telling us that when the MC's sister got married that she is NTRing the protagonist.

    My overpowered sex system
    Urban · No5347
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    ok... I'll leave it seriously, the MC is so stupid, his intelligence is below average, he even told him like that, friend, what he did, besides, with the system, I don't think there's anything to get it, I know NTR is back

    Ch 10 Sex Lord in his sex School
    My overpowered sex system
    Urban · No5347
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    ummm although personally I prefer the type of villain who is always in control of the situation, I also dislike character development a bit when it's in the MC.

    Ch 16 Sabrina becoming Noah's Fiancee
    Reborn in Cultivation World with Ultimate Villain Cultivation System
    Anime & Comics · Akros_Zero
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Posted

    Ok, I'll be as honest as I can, I didn't read it but I think most people won't read it unless you're so bored seriously its synopsis just in case it ruins the reading, since you can see what For the systems, besides the chakra thing is seen as pure adornment, what is the use if we all know that it is not going to run out, and all those rewards, it will become strong without any objective.

    i am the god of systems
    Anime & Comics · CWN1223
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    the next chapter decides if he left me reading, this chapter also disappointed me because of how cowardly the MC was, he had an image of an intelligent, calculating, calm MC and well this He destroyed

    Ch 20 Offer and Decision
    Marvel : Path to Singularity (Rewrite)
    Movies · S_Pandey_0170
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    why do you destroy everything I treasure 😔 *insert stuy meme from Maicon del Medio.

    Ch 9 Chapter-9: Sorry Guys
    A Perverted Boy With GenderBender & Hypnosis Skills In Another World.
    Fantasy · Infinite999
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    well the second chapter, I still can't see the personality of the MC, ok timeline, now I hope it doesn't become a Chinese novel type where the MC trains and has Saitama's strength, although Seeing him buy a suit just because he joined the hero association...I don't know, for now I hope he has a trick that makes him unique.

    Ch 2 Hero costume
    One day I wake up in one punch man world
    Anime & Comics · Zeremy_York
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Commented

    ummm let's see if they upload more chapters, at the moment the timeline seems confusing to me, since I don't know if Saitama still has hair or not, if he does then I don't think it should still exist organization of heroes

    Ch 1 Hello new world
    One day I wake up in one punch man world
    Anime & Comics · Zeremy_York
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  • Fabian_Ochoa
    Fabian_Ochoa1yr
    Posted

    Giving my honest opinion, it is a very good read, as far as I am reading it is very good, there is no Yuri, stupid morals, nonsense of hesitation or meek MC, this is your novel if you like yanderes and ocenity , So I give it a 9/10, not nine because it is impossible with the number of women it has to pay attention to each one unless it does 100 chapters for each one so it was something that was not I could avoid, although I like the harem, that would be its fault that I see.

    Ancient Hypnosis
    Fantasy · Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
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