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Only here for daily recommended fast pass, but this is more cringey than most
Yeah… author should go back and rip out all of this obvious word count padding. “It stops later” isn’t making me want to keep reading now.
Even the name of his first or sometimes origin rune, the yellow turban or scarf sometimes strongman, or talismans… even the colors and levels and quality of items and skills and creatures are different so you can’t even tell if something is stronger or weaker based on the translation
I expect some weird translations, but this is so inconsistent that you can’t really get into the story
I don’t get why so many authors here want to bang their own sister.
Author can you please stop inflating word count with all this copy/paste. It really detracts from the story.
Author you spent the entire 20+ chapters saying how little he felt for his family. This reaction is way out of line with that. If he’s this emotional now, he should have been at least a little more worried before this other than “I guess I’ll see what my family is doing even though I don’t care about them”
No job? He had a job at the Internet cafe, and a paragraph or two later he reaffirms he had a job… Don’t be this lazy with details author! These things really detract from the story. Also use the same gender pronoun throughout (her vs his). It gets confusing and makes the reader think you are taking about some other character you forgot to introduce to the scene (which also happened in earlier chapters)
This is what, 12 chapters since the end of the previous volume and he still hasn’t checked his new memories from the battle before and in the spire? And the status of that damaged armor — I’m guessing he will give it to marble saint to wear bc big armor doesn’t seem to suit his style of combat.
No, all other survivors were traitors or killed by traitors. The author had waaaaaaaaayyyy too many traitors it would have been literally impossible for any humans to survive in the original timeline. Author needs to work on consistency, grammar, and stop making up a completely new concept every page for the MC to come out unscathed. There are no consequences to any actions other than MC gets more coins/kills/items/etc but those gains don’t mean anything in the next page because he just gets another order of magnitude higher resources the next page. Not to mention all the “contracts” all these other characters agree to be a slave which is way out of character for them and is impossible to believe.
I thought it was mentioned in a previous chapter that this was his soul weapon that still had some hardening effect but was not his original hardening ability because he has shadow now?
Covid alert
No. The whole joke and phrases used is “funny” because the premise that lgbt = bad. It’s lazy writing, in 99% of chinese webnovels, and just plain not funny.
Chinese webnovels treat female characters as property to show status for the male characters. They have no personality or character arcs of their own. Author should try writing all characters as male first, then randomly choosing half and changing them to female names/pronouns. Writing will be a lot better.
Lots of webnovels on here are obsessed with nonsensical status vendettas. In the real world no rich person/company would soend resources going “to war” with another rich person/company over single insult to a child. They would immediately lose money and contracts. Petty vindictiveness is not good for business.