Its good, there is no need to change something that you created. I am not sure what the pew pew thing is, but if it’s what I think it is then they need to find religion cause that just nasty.

I really like this Pokémon theme. Yeah it’ another transmigration story, but I really like the way the world is built. It’ not just another transmigration into the same world as the show or a multiverse version of the shows world. So author, whoever you are, please keep uploading your story!

Why cant i read past this chapter?