a filipino reader and writer who loves to read and write novels.
This is kinda new to me a start of very strong unknown feeling for the characters. Nice way on bringing the troubles of each of every teens had especially depression on how they would feel or how they would think as of the moment they felt alone. I love on how you construct mathew's character where he was fighting his depression and urge of having suicide because of his reason to lice was his mother. As i want to continue it further more i have so much to do as a student i want to get back at it as soon as i finish the things i have to do in my online class.
way to go. Im a person who easily get lost when the first chapter is not good so basically i am relaying on the first chapter of anybook and when someone had a great first chapter. I mean by great is when the first chapter hooked me i will be able to go to read all the way through the story. nice way on describing the settings in the scene around the character. all in all way to go to hook me in the first chapter author
First of all I love how the characters shows how a regular people life was. having a reliable friend like brian who always cares for his girl childhood friends and how caring and obsessed the male lead character to his family Honestly I haven't read the whole story yet but i love to rate the first 5-10 chapters of a book and I can say it really does get me in. Mostly I wont read any romance stories but if i found a good one like this i would read it until the end I'll be back if this story is finished and Read it again throughly (para hindi bitin hahahahhaha ) and mostly because i will become busy after all Im just a college student
it is a nice story overall, the first chapter was a catchy one i might go back and finish what i have started i just don't have time to read it all at once but still you have a good character desceiption and the story outline as well keep up the good work for the rest of the book