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Sara was boring, I start the next one and get better, then shit on the character, this fight between them is already boring, he doesn't need to resolve their relationship, but he and the fucking leader, at least he has to make her respect he, he lets her betray the faction in front of all rival groups. is focusing on making his clown mc, and his bribes from traitors
I think the problem itself is not that the ordeal is long, but as only 1 cap a day goes out, the long ordeal ends up being dragged away. the things that happen in the ordeal are very interesting, but he focuses so much on them, that the coolest part, the real world itself, and everything that is happening is getting a little forgotten. but as i said i think the best novel here on the site, i just think that the best part is not getting focus, and the part that "was" to be secondary takes almost all focus
your novel is very good, to find the best on the site. but I like it a lot more with this faster rhythm that seems to be coming. even though I liked it a lot, I found the two trials a little lengthy, especially the second one, ex: several cap to get out of the sea, ex: cap Tim and others. The most interesting part is the world with various races and the things of the oracle, but the focus so far has been very much on trials. I think that trials, very fast 10-15 cap and focusing on the world and things of the oracle, was going to give a very good gas. but as your novel is very good, her universe has a lot of interesting things, congratulations for the incredible work.
your novel is very good, to find the best on the site. but I like it a lot more with this faster rhythm that seems to be coming. even though I liked it a lot, I found the two trials a little lengthy, especially the second one, ex: several cap to get out of the sea, ex: cap Tim and others. The most interesting part is the world with various races and the things of the oracle, but the focus so far has been very much on trials. I think that trials, very fast 10-15 cap and focusing on the world and things of the oracle, was going to give a very good gas. but as your novel is very good, her universe has a lot of interesting things, congratulations for the incredible work.
yes the numbers are very exaggerated. at a level difficult to even imagine a meteor the size of thousands of universes. But the novel is very good, I like it too much, every day I hope to leave the cap, the story is very interesting. incredibly captivating novel
this is an interesting question, because in the end shiro should probably become a god greater than everyone and greater than the system and who created it, god tier 9 or 10 something never mentioned, but I believe she will become a god that surpasses everything, if does that happen what happens to the daughter's level?
the author likes big numbers, gold and super inflated, the size of the planet and the size of a universe, and he knows the meteor of the second trial, if I remember it well and thousands of times bigger than the world that jake is. so the meteor was the size of several universes. addicted to large numbers