Barry_Lydia
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Barry_Lydia2yrCommentedIs it suppose to go back and forth between past tense and present tense? It makes the overall flow of the story feel choppy
Yujia breathes a sigh of relief while she walks through the forest Hui'er told her about, feeling the cool spring breeze rustling through the leaves. Although she had only been at this world for a day, it felt long. Too long. And during those long hours exploring the world, she had been monitored by Hui'er so carefully that she almost felt trapped.- Barry_Lydia2yrCommented
Is there a chapter missing?? The last chapter ended with Madam Li calling her daughte a slut and then this next chapter the duke of Quin is already at the scene about to leave with his mother that’ been poisoned? When was she poisoned? When did he arrive? When did the imperial guards arrive?
Attacked - Barry_Lydia2yrCommentedCh 91 Bandits or Assassins?
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*all I did was *
"There's no need. All I do is give some information that you can easily know from other people," Wei Liuying refused. - Barry_Lydia2yrCommented
*that it became a habit*
Wei Zilin looked at Wei Xiao Hua with confusion in her eyes. After all, she knew that she had to wait for her two siblings over and over. It was to the point that it has become a habit that whenever they came to the academy together, the other two would be punished. - Barry_Lydia2yrCommented
*was getting*
"Third Sister is getting punished again," Wei Zilin said. Her tone was filled with mockery even though her expression was still fairly polite. "Did you manage to pass the teacher's strict assessment?" - Barry_Lydia2yrCommented
*she was*
The two girls walked out of the room. Wei Xiao Hua was in a different classroom because she's two years older compared to the two of them. They rarely met with each other since the class was always separated. - Barry_Lydia2yrCommented
*the three of them had*
Even though Wei Zilin was really impolite, Wei Liuying didn't mind in the slightest bit. The three of them have to go home together, so if someone got punished, the others have to wait. Because of that, Wei Liuying hurriedly finished the copying. - Barry_Lydia2yrCommented
*if not because they had* instead of have
"Are you not finished, yet?" Wei Zilin asked when the time for the class was over. She walked to Wei Liuying's direction with a frown on her face. If not because they have to come home together, it was clear that Wei Zilin would have long asked the coach to bring her back home first. - Barry_Lydia3yrReplied to blowfish1407Ch 144 The Man with The White Sword