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Anton_Wickman

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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman19d
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    overall stupid decision if u ask me

    Ch 27 Back Home (2)
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman19d
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    not a fan of this, at least let the mc keep the experiment and kidnapping hidden. now his behaviour seem more childish to ajuka who manage to find out cuz why not. i can buy ajuka finding out about mc secrets, if he is just keep quite about them

    Ch 27 Back Home (2)
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman23d
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    would be Nice if the mc could be a bit more humane in character and feelings towards his family and future fiancee, at least show simw desire for rias or apprecuation for them that is not focused on just their abilities

    Ch 25 Six Months (3)
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman30d
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    will the mc develop something to purify his bloodline?

    Ch 22 Play House (2)
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman1mth
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    author can you please write more seriously, i feel like u have made every chapter comedic and mc ranting about something lowers the quality if you ask me

    Ch 108 Chapter 108 - Dinner
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
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    also splitting up the readers attention in multiple worlds with new characters increases the chance of the reader not liking that world or never seen that anime etc which would just make that whole arc of the story feel like filler. this is the feeling i had when we left avatar world but i hade hope it would be a short period away from avatar and the mc would come back verk quickly.

    Ch 107 Future of this Book (Voting!)
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
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    i pick Option 2. u could make it multiverse by making the series last in avatar all the way until the endof the legend of korra tineline with bending techniques that make em age slower and start the multiverse when the story and character feels more complete and grown/fleshed out. overall i think this is one of the few good avatar fanfics and u should keep exploring the avatar world and not just abandon the majority of the characters like u did towards the end so far, would be a waste otherwise. also u should make this kind of voting again if u do go along with my suggestion and keep exploring avatar and do multiverse later on regarding which world u should visit

    Ch 107 Future of this Book (Voting!)
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
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    where u at author

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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
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    i hope the mc griws more with him starting his journey as a character. so far all cool things about the mc comes from his own cheat and not any skills etc from himself. like no joke that he managed to reveal his ability to heal old pokemon like that to professor oak and any others that thought about why he needed them and saw their condition later. this kinda thing is common with the mc so far and he feels a bit stupid/naive when we see it written from different perspectives in some chapters. at least i hope the story grows past this part of his character as him always being protected and not informed when he makes stupid decisions. more emotional growth like being too afraid and being a coward was shown at the thought at meeting a legendary. and greed is common for the mc with the utopia tempting him to "borrow" mega stones. overall i hope the author let the character grow betong being op with a cheat and being protected by others all the time. exemple: journey towards greatness pokemon novel is not a perfect fanfic but it gives the mc a feeling of being a good pokemon trainer and battler with strategy in mind as well. even though the novel itself has many issues.

    Ch 636 CH17 (631), Arriving In Lilycove City
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
    Replied to The_last_airbender

    just wanted to ask, but did u start writing more comedy in chapters after the male group like grindelwald and Nicolas mc and dumbeldore gathered, just noticed that it appears way more and text.

    Ch 83 Chapter 83 - Change of Positions
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
    Replied to The_last_airbender

    thats a Nice idea, always liked bloodlines as a way if power in novels. though idk where in marvel u can find them except asgard and maybe mutants

    Ch 83 Chapter 83 - Change of Positions
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
    Replied to The_last_airbender

    great minds think alike

    Ch 83 Chapter 83 - Change of Positions
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
    Replied to The_last_airbender

    precision master

    Ch 83 Chapter 83 - Change of Positions
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
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    idea: lineage in HP world will become more common when mc buys magic that can nurture certain percent of wizard lineage you got. it will taket time but eventually People will specualize in different elements and by the guidance of mc they will focus on 1 specific thing in society, olivander might get wand focused lineage and continue their family like that and others with space element can focus on transportaition in the hp world etc. with this they can reach the image of the prophecy of traveling planets and advancing society faster. more and more families might also appar with different elements and more schools might appear that only takes in those with that specific element

    Ch 83 Chapter 83 - Change of Positions
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
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    did that long ago

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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
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    taket them to a world with more focus on bloodline and lineage so the inspiration if the mc can tao into making his lineage. so far what i think u could do is base his lineage in the four elements and then connect the story to the avatar world somehow, and later on upgraee it wit the more rarer elements BTW if u go to the witcher world u can then get elder blood lineage if u want for time and space elements

    Ch 77 where did Asmodeus go ?
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
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    can ypu clarify if time works different in the other world? so they dont abandon their schools for an adventure and come back 1 year later. 2 weeeks gone by or no time at all works fine as for the world they have gone to, i would prefer the witcher as I love rhat series and as dar as I know it is not too advanced nor simple world and u could expand how magic works in the witcher world or upgrade it to fit the story

    Ch 77 where did Asmodeus go ?
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
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    will wizards like merlin and king Arthur return as well? since the density of magic will continue to increase

    Ch 72 Chapter 72 - Poor Godric
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
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    plz dont cliffhang us

    Ch 71 Chapter 71 - Dumbledore: Am I now unemployed?
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  • Anton_Wickman
    Anton_Wickman3mth
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    dlnt forget to add ancient magic from hogwarts legacy to the plot oncluding the map room

    Ch 69 Chapter 69 - The Academy
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