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    First of all I want to say that I really like the story and the characters. But what I don't like is that the main character is under constant pressure to get stronger. Just when one opponent is dealt with the next one is already there. In my Opinion the Author should give the mc and her friends more time for development. (It Doesn't matter if she is 20 or 100 years old in this kind of Novel) and when there are peaceful times they are mostly just scipped and no real character development in that scipped time. now I wrote mostly negative things but that's just because I'm not good at writing what I like, sorry.

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    The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
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