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I found this site panda novel that has free privilege chapters of this novel and i advise you to read from there so that thief author doesn't get money to stop be so greedy and cancel the last privilege that many gave him magic castle for bonus chapter and he just cheat us.
I had heard MyLittleBrother is the most greedy author in webnovel and never send gifts to him .Now i understand why they told me this if you send him magic castles and he say he will release bonus chapter he just add privilege again and not bonus chapters .
I think you should stop so many chapters with R-18.it's not bad but I think you should release R-18 when he sleep for the first time with someone and when like now just skip it or make it 2 chapter at least not 4.Try to focus the story more.This is just my opinion don't take it in a bad way