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Very interesting power fantasy going on here, but the prose and structure of the words are easy to get lost in. There are a lot of things being described in the past tense, that make scenes play out very statically. Also some of the paragraphs should be broken up or spaced differently when switching perspectives between scenes. All in all a captivating story with a few errors in the quality of writing.
Author you got a nice book. Make sure to keep going I'm gonna keep it in my library and wait till it gets a lot of chaps so I can bench read this.
I think i rating got deleted so i will make my review again.This is an interesting book. The concept itself is kinda similar to mythological genes but it's impressive the author-sama is 13. And daaaaaam 6 chaps in 3 hours. tho the chaps are kinda short its still impressive tho I hope he increases the word count
Not bad not bad
exatcly u frickin perv