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Chang to “slightly bowing his head”
Reassembled means “to put back together”, you should change it to resembled.
Call -> recall
Question -> quest
Seriously I am absolutely tired of seeing this awful gif
“Transverse” should be changed to “traverse”
Yeah they shouldn’t know his real name
Matter -> mind
I was hoping for the doctor to be the love interest
Answer -> ask
As soon -> and soon
Over his sword -> over his shoulder
Basal -> basic
“Victor of the best” should be “victor of the bet”
This is an awkwardly phrased joke if it was a joke at all it just seems so forced like the author wants the Mc to be funny to the other characters but doesn’t know how to
Why did it take so long to poison them, should have started with that.