OneshotMaco
I like reading anything fantasy and sci-fi.I despise gender-bender and yaoi.Hate stupid plots where FML manipulates MC into doing things he wouldn't normally do or change his mind.
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OneshotMaco15dReplied to Damein_Jaschke_1980That's why he got the robotic eye.
“He had been treated well. It’s said that with the latest scientific technology, as long as it hasn’t completed necrosis, you can still connect it back. But the price….gee, indeed he’s worthy to be the descendant of wealthy family.”- OneshotMaco15dReplied to Past_guardian
no it go from beginner to intermediate to advanced then mastery
“Card selection completed…..advanced police fighting techniques……analysing model…….model established……..card model establishment complete….” - OneshotMaco15dCommented
Isn't even what he asked.
“Ah, that!” The registrar suddenly remembered. “When he came here to retrieve the grass, I did use that opportunity to ask him but he said he did not need any for now. If he needs it, he would put up a request again.” - OneshotMaco15dCommented
Let's be honest, ain't no siblings call their brother/sister bro or sis. We call them by name and rarely say that their family relation unless someone ask.
“Bro, you are so daring right?” - OneshotMaco15dReplied to BlueSpark_Cat
As a younger sibling, I abstain from this message
Li Xiaorui looked at these two bickering and felt the comfort deep within her chest. Unconsciously, her two children had grown up. Although Su Hao’s talent was not great, these two siblings never had a bad relationship with each other. - OneshotMaco16dReplied to ThefriendBecause of Su Hao's ability, his grade E model analysis pulled down his overall score.
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107th I'm prob last
The Era of Origin Ability - OneshotMaco1mthReplied to timeturnerJohn didn't refuse. After all, it's necessary for Awakeners to exchange information and share some intelligence with each other.
- OneshotMaco1mthReplied to daniel_nievasAs Charles painted a vivid picture of Alex's intellectual prowess, Grete's eyes widened in astonishment. Who would've thought that the debonair playboy had such substantial accomplishments to his name?
- OneshotMaco1mthReplied to The_Thunder_Lord
True, but to me as a reader or 'overseer' it seems a stupid reaction that happens far to often. Though u as a author are correct in its usage as their are many people who would react like that in this situation, so I would have to agree with you. Heck I know some people who would spend hours contemplating if they were dreaming or in an illusion. Hope you have a great night and an surge of creativity tomorrow.
He knew that this was just a game, but the sight of her breasts and the way they jiggled with each movement made it hard for him to resist. - OneshotMaco1mthCommented
Why he still think he in the game ? I mean he is but it's now a reality to him.
He knew that this was just a game, but the sight of her breasts and the way they jiggled with each movement made it hard for him to resist. - OneshotMaco1mthReplied to juSTAbystandR"Oh, come on!We're out of school now. Just call me COCO. I'm practically your sister's friend, no need to be so formal." COCO replied, looking at Victoria. " Don't be shy. Call my name."
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If bros from the future why would he need to have others contact for info when he should know most of the info already? Though I get having contact info for their movements and or being friends, if he is from the future he should hold way more info then they could ever provide.
John didn't refuse. After all, it's necessary for Awakeners to exchange information and share some intelligence with each other. - OneshotMaco1mthReplied to ShadowLordAlpha
I mean knowing that she betrayed him in the future means she has bad mindset and probably won't change much in this life either, so it's best to just eliminate or get away from the problem(her).
"I made it clear over the phone. We're breaking up," John said coldly. "Get lost, I don't want to see you again." - OneshotMaco1mthReplied to OneshotMaco
Later in the story the comma's seem to be used properly, so idk if it's just the sentences around this one that is capitalizing after comma's or not. Sorry if I'm saying something completely unnecessary.
'I could feel its intention, When I first transmigrated, Because of my fear of the unknown and anxiety,' - OneshotMaco1mthCommented
Why the author capitalizing the first word after each comma? Idk if they know not too or not tbh. If not, you are only supposed to capitlalize after the ending of the sentence or when ur trying to draw attention to a specific situation or exaggerating something like 'Wow' 'Amazing' depending ont he situation. Comma's don't end sentence there's used to split a sentence into different components, like a small break in a sentence. I'm not an english teacher or someone specializing in english so don't hold me accountable if I'm saying something wrong with my explanation, this is just my take on how comma's are used. Not hating on the author, just confused on why the author is capitalizing the first word after each sentence. Sorry for my rant and hope you have a great day.
'I could feel its intention, When I first transmigrated, Because of my fear of the unknown and anxiety,' - OneshotMaco1mthReplied to NunuXD
Yw
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*Liv would practice with Ethan. I think
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Is in the background 👁️👄👁️
As much as it could make us rich, I'd rather keep my family's privacy to myself than have strangers on the Internet watching us interact and doing who knows what with our video.