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10 seconds?? I think the author doesn't understand how powerful Jogo is. He took out Nanami, Naobito and Maki in literally an instant (doesn't matter if they were injured or not)...
I don't understand the author's thought process here. There is no reason to follow the plot. There is a special grade curse here. Why in gods name would you even want to get close to it? The main character has no mastery of cursed energy to speak of, the strongest person is Megumi, who basically can only self-destruct... There is no endgame where they can defeat the special grade 'relying on a strategy'...
This are so weird... WHY in gods name would you keep a shattered helmet (implying that Tali had her head smashed in it) with you, or Grunt's burnt armor (again implying he burnt to death INSIDE the armour). This isn't a 'game' collection, it's his real life...
This is so bad... The POV switches multiple times, and clearly the author can't decide if the MC is monologuing or if there is a narrator...
What?? ME3 was insanely good..
I think you mean "but to the prepared mind, re-life was the next great adventure."
Thanks for replying - I'll take a little time to answer as well. I say 'verbatim' (as opposed to 'inspired by') because a huge amount of interactions, story and even just simple motivations are near identical to the other (CotE) one. There are parts of the story where, as long as I switch out the character names, I'd probably have 80-90% of the same content. I'm talking about dialog, gacha items, even motivation for going after girls and conversations with them. The main character feels like he was copy/paste from the other novel. I think that you could have switched up things - as an example, have him have different gacha things, which would mean he would need to do things different.
This has got nothing to do with the previous 4 paragraphs...
When did this happen?
That's the same zanpakuto as his son. That's just lazy writing. Why even bother...
Urahara was never the vice captain??? He was the 3rd seat...
what are you on about??? In the next chapter he mentions the timeline is 200 years before the start of the storyline...
I didn't expect much from this novel, considering I haven't watched Modern Family, but it's pretty decent. The characters all have their own stories, and the cutaways are handled well enough that they didn't feel like a hinderance. The only negatives I have are a) the author wastes a lot of time with padded plot, b) there are a lot of liberties with real world timeline vs modern family timeline (e.g. Coldplay aren't a big band in the MC timeline), and c) even without getting perks, the MC is handsome, strong, super talented, and gets the girls. Without getting perks. Then he gets the perks afterwards... why though...
Wow this is... not well written. Author should try and break this kind of dialogue up so that it flows more naturally in conversation. Something like "You don't even remember your parents!" "Parents?" "Your mother and father... they..." "They what?" "They died!... Last year, on a trip to your homeland, Brazil, the plane they rented crashed! But you can't even remember them!" etc etc etc... Just some kind of example, so you don't get that unnatural dialogue segments...
Sonido is not a 'Hollow' ability, rather an 'Arrancar' ability