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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks3d
    Posted

    Novel has an interesting premise, however, MC just literally gets things handed to him. He goes back in time "Hey Ancestor, don't forget to do this." In the present day it's automatically in his storage ring. How boring. Translation quality drops significantly midway through, reader beware.

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    Douluo: Helping my ancestors ascend to godhood
    Anime & Comics · Un1que
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks3d
    Commented

    Spirit Douluo I think here, not Titled

    Shui Bing'er spoke slowly, her tone like a command, and the eight Titled Douluo powerhouses around her immediately moved in response.
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    Douluo: Helping my ancestors ascend to godhood
    Anime & Comics · Un1que
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks4d
    Commented

    10 seconds?? I think the author doesn't understand how powerful Jogo is. He took out Nanami, Naobito and Maki in literally an instant (doesn't matter if they were injured or not)...

    But he couldn't help admitting that the curse was too strong. Even if for someone like Gojo it wasn't much, the current Itadori couldn't see himself lasting more than 10 seconds against someone like him.
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: Becoming the strongest as Yuji Itadori
    Anime & Comics · TheJiujitsuGuy
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks4d
    Commented

    I don't understand the author's thought process here. There is no reason to follow the plot. There is a special grade curse here. Why in gods name would you even want to get close to it? The main character has no mastery of cursed energy to speak of, the strongest person is Megumi, who basically can only self-destruct... There is no endgame where they can defeat the special grade 'relying on a strategy'...

    If possible, he would like to increase Megumi and Nobara's caution about this, or everything would repeat itself in the end.
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: Becoming the strongest as Yuji Itadori
    Anime & Comics · TheJiujitsuGuy
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks4d
    Commented

    This are so weird... WHY in gods name would you keep a shattered helmet (implying that Tali had her head smashed in it) with you, or Grunt's burnt armor (again implying he burnt to death INSIDE the armour). This isn't a 'game' collection, it's his real life...

    Looking at Tali's shattered helmet, a small notebook from Mordin Solus, Wrex's shotgun, Grunt's burnt armor, and, last but not least, Jane Shepard's dog tags, Samael squirmed in pain.
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    Time Effect ( A Mass Effect Fanfiction)
    Video Games · Pop0
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks4d
    Commented

    This is so bad... The POV switches multiple times, and clearly the author can't decide if the MC is monologuing or if there is a narrator...

    But now, let's go to the end of the last cycle, to see how that time loop went.
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    Time Effect ( A Mass Effect Fanfiction)
    Video Games · Pop0
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks4d
    Commented

    What?? ME3 was insanely good..

    Samael was a reicarnator from Earth. The one where Mass Effect was a game. He wasn't a god gamer or anything like that, but he did, however, play a LOT of Mass Effect when he was a teenager and an adult. Even the Andromeda one, and the only reason he didn't play Mass Effect 4 was that at the time of his death, it wasn't released yet. He even liked Mass Effect 3...
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    Time Effect ( A Mass Effect Fanfiction)
    Video Games · Pop0
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks10d
    Posted

    Surprisingly good and fleshed out. Pace is fast, and skips a lot of the character development, however enough key scenes are staged to keep the reader hooked

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    I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)
    Movies · BarCalak
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks10d
    Commented

    I think you mean "but to the prepared mind, re-life was the next great adventure."

    Transmigrating twenty-two years in the past into the body of a seven-year-old may seem like a massive inconvenience, but to the ill-prepared mind, re-life was the next great adventure. The mechanics of my arrival in the time-stream would remain a mystery till my dying day. 
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    I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)
    Movies · BarCalak
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks10d
    Replied to Sprewks

    Thanks for replying - I'll take a little time to answer as well. I say 'verbatim' (as opposed to 'inspired by') because a huge amount of interactions, story and even just simple motivations are near identical to the other (CotE) one. There are parts of the story where, as long as I switch out the character names, I'd probably have 80-90% of the same content. I'm talking about dialog, gacha items, even motivation for going after girls and conversations with them. The main character feels like he was copy/paste from the other novel. I think that you could have switched up things - as an example, have him have different gacha things, which would mean he would need to do things different.

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    Sex System in Solo Leveling
    Anime & Comics · MilkLover
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks11d
    Posted

    Author says this was "inspired" by the Classroom of the Elite version, but this is about a 90% verbatim copy, with the 10% difference being the difference in setting and characters. Absolute laziness from the Author.

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    Sex System in Solo Leveling
    Anime & Comics · MilkLover
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks11d
    Commented

    This has got nothing to do with the previous 4 paragraphs...

    Now, through his battle with Marenoshin Ōmaeda, Ailin had proven to the Second Division members that he possessed the strength to become their vice captain.
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    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
    Anime & Comics · ZenpaiTrans
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks11d
    Commented

    When did this happen?

    However, Ailin had witnessed a captain unveil Bankai before. Moreover, neither Yoruichi or Urahara had released Reiatsu. Hence the pressure they exuded didn't exceed Ailin's sensations when facing Yamamoto Genryusai previously.
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    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
    Anime & Comics · ZenpaiTrans
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks11d
    Commented

    That's the same zanpakuto as his son. That's just lazy writing. Why even bother...

    "Smash him apart, Gegetsuburi!"
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    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks11d
    Commented

    Urahara was never the vice captain??? He was the 3rd seat...

    The other had messy, dull yellow hair and listless eyes, seemingly disinterested in everything. This was the current Vice-Captain of the Second Division as well as the Captain of the Detention Unit, Kisuke Urahara.
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    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks11d
    Commented

    what are you on about??? In the next chapter he mentions the timeline is 200 years before the start of the storyline...

    In the recent hundred years, the war between Soul Society and the Wandenreich was intense, and the Wandenreich Expeditionary Force had become a real meat grinder.
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    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks13d
    Posted

    I didn't expect much from this novel, considering I haven't watched Modern Family, but it's pretty decent. The characters all have their own stories, and the cutaways are handled well enough that they didn't feel like a hinderance. The only negatives I have are a) the author wastes a lot of time with padded plot, b) there are a lot of liberties with real world timeline vs modern family timeline (e.g. Coldplay aren't a big band in the MC timeline), and c) even without getting perks, the MC is handsome, strong, super talented, and gets the girls. Without getting perks. Then he gets the perks afterwards... why though...

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    Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
    TV · Alittlepiggy33
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks18d
    Posted

    Surprisingly good. Author did a good job of creating a Mass Effect world and fleshing out some of the characters. Would definitely say it's a bit strange for him to include 3 SI characters, but glad he went with a real AU world.

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    Mass Effect: Instability
    Video Games · Almost_a_Shadow
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks23d
    Commented

    Wow this is... not well written. Author should try and break this kind of dialogue up so that it flows more naturally in conversation. Something like "You don't even remember your parents!" "Parents?" "Your mother and father... they..." "They what?" "They died!... Last year, on a trip to your homeland, Brazil, the plane they rented crashed! But you can't even remember them!" etc etc etc... Just some kind of example, so you don't get that unnatural dialogue segments...

    "Oh my God... I'm sorry Kazu-kun... Your name is Kazuki Mendes Kurosawa, you're 18 years old, your father is Brazilian, and your mother is Japanese. You lived in Brazil most of your life, but this year, six months ago to be more precise, your parents died in a plane crash." She said with sadness in her eyes, almost crying again, but I interrupted her before I had to wait another 10 minutes to continue listening to her.
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    Level Up in Highschool of the Dead
    Anime & Comics · KanmuruZ
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  • Sprewks
    Sprewks4mth
    Commented

    Sonido is not a 'Hollow' ability, rather an 'Arrancar' ability

    [Sonido: Movement technique
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    Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde
    Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter
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