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MrsMimiSparkles3yrReplied to TiredVioletI was about to say the very same. If you are writing about early pregnancy the research early pregnancy
"You should get a hot bath before you sleep to help you calm your muscles and nerves." Anatalia said to Alicia. "Oh, and I suggest taking some warm honey water after your intake of the herbs I will give. They are a little bitter to taste."- MrsMimiSparkles3yrCommented
Omg Leon has a right to be mad at her she hid her pregnancy. That baby is half Leon so he had a right to know. He was happy when he was told the news it was the lies he wasn't happy about. I don't see why every one was acting that way towards him. He literally took a minute to think about her lies. Completely understandable. It's not like he was upset because of the pregnancy or said anything bad about it
Ch 308 Couple’s First Quarrel (1) - MrsMimiSparkles3yrCommented
How many by the s does one paragraph need
By then I felt Regaleon's hands trail over my undergarments and quickly took them off. He then took off his undergarment by himself. By then I was surprised that my feet were lifted off the ground in an instant. - MrsMimiSparkles3yrCommented
How can't so many simple errors pass with a scored person in charge of edits
The priest started to preside. The wedding right was short, and we proceeded with our vows shortly. - MrsMimiSparkles3yrCommentedCh 195 Chapter 72
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Cringe. I feel bad for this but I correct my 5 year old on this all the time.
"I will. I promise to be much more stronger than before." I promised. - MrsMimiSparkles3yrReplied to PandaCookie
And let's not forget the sir in Sir Leon should be a capital as its his title. Same with Princess and lord. When used before a name it becomes a title and requires a capital. Just spent this morning teaching my 5 year old this grammar rule, so I'm finding it super annoying
Ch 15 Duel - MrsMimiSparkles3yrCommented
He didn't court her before biting and he didn't approach her himself. Heaven shouldn't have had to smooth his introduction when he asked Lucian to dance his didn't acknowledge her and the meal didn't go well afterwards. And as far as Hazel's conserved her daughter want to be ruler is now a general off to negotiations with a person who wants war on her own
"Your Majes…" Before he could finish the word, her mother slapped him across the face. - MrsMimiSparkles3yrCommented
A Hazel slap. It's about time
"Your Majes…" Before he could finish the word, her mother slapped him across the face. - MrsMimiSparkles3yrReplied to dog_lover_7
Love Zarin he just needs to learn how to precess his emotions. That growth and internal battle would make a good book
Two days passed and Heaven didn't come to see him despite the hurtful things she had said to him. Why did he expect her to come? Maybe she was right. She was always the one to come and apologize whenever they fought, and he was expecting the same thing even now. But Heaven had changed. She was not the childhood friend that he knew. He wouldn't mind the change if it didn't happen so suddenly. He just didn't trust Zamiel. - MrsMimiSparkles3yrCommentedCh 177 Chapter 54
- MrsMimiSparkles3yrCommentedBefore leaving him, he had kissed her lightly, but she was still giddy. And her fangs and claws were still out. What was this man doing to her?