I started this book because it popped up on Facebook and I quickly became addicted. With the money I have spent reading this I reallt hate seeing comments that I am now going to have to wait a while for just one chapter. I could buy a few actual books that have an ending for the money I have spent paying for chapters in bulk. I hope the Author actually reads all the comments and takes into consideration all of the readers needs as well. I know it takes time to write a story, but maybe try to write a few chapters at a time and post them through the week while writing some more? This is such a good story andI would hate to lose interest because I have to wait forever to read more.

I wish Alicia had told Leon about Gladiolous forcing himself on her. That would have been an amazing fight to read about! Especially with Leon having his newer abilities using his magic.

I agree. This paragraph took a second read through just to be able to read it correctly while fixing the errors in my head. It is a good story, but there are so many errors it makes you wonder if the editor is actually doing their job trying to fix them.