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VirgoGimini1mthReplied to HotIceWhat a dumbass author! Based on your attitude it's likely the same with your TRASH NOVEL! Lol! No wonder your MC is dumb because its also your personality! If you can't tolerate such question better delete that comment! What a freak! The dude is just asking a questions what a dumb author. Your novel is trash same with your attitude, tsk tsk.
- VirgoGimini1mthCommented
Umm does the author know how to use exclaimation mark???
"YOU IMBECILE DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU HAVE DONE, HOW BIG OF A LOSS YOU'VE CAUSED, WHERE IS YOUR GROUP LEADER CALL HIM." - VirgoGimini1mthCommented
Thought the mc is supe supe smart, but this is a bit dumb way of thinking :]
Jake was seriously tempted to place his Floating Island in the middle of the void, in an area without any Floating Islands around it for tens of trillions of light years, but Keru and his companions vehemently dissuaded him from doing so. - VirgoGimini1mthReplied to Aquartiz
are you an idiot? of course we all know he is the MC that's why its COMMON SENSE that he is not average. But, apoiler like this is breaking the pace of the readers, because whats the point of reading when they 'know' that the MC will dominate the MIRROR UNIVERSE because of the SPOILER like this? Do you know what i MEAN? Its common SENSE!
Clenching his teeth, he followed the lame veteran to the one who would haunt his nightmares in the months to come, but also the one who would contribute most to shaping the future Jake. The Jake whose name would make the entire Mirror Universe tremble with fear many years later. - VirgoGimini1mthReplied to webnov905
The author forgot to inform her that's why. Thats the flaw...
Xi's words gave him a chill. He had learned his lesson. Still, he didn't feel responsible for his mistake. If she had informed him earlier about the risks, or the process for compressing the Aether, he would not have acted so rashly. - VirgoGimini1mthCommented
So where the heck big bang came from?
[Simply put, it is another place, a larger place. The classical Universe born out of the Big Bang that you're in, we call it a Seed World. These worlds are many and are part of what we call the Dark Universe in reference to their low concentration of Aether.] - VirgoGimini7mthCommented
t*ng *na ang corny naman, one piece, jack sparrow, etc. Sobrang cliches nayan insan nakakasira ng story mo insan
"Aye, Captain," Jibbs replied. "According to the rumors, the great treasure was hidden by Uncle Roger, which he called, the One Cheese." - VirgoGimini7mthCommented
The taming method is too cringe to read, and the conversation between elemental spirit and human was too flat :|
"Ok, I will accept the contract but you shouldn't go back on your words," the small earth elemental spirit said seriously to Ajax, which made him thought, "Hooh, cute". - VirgoGimini7mthCommented
Basically he has 1000 units. 380 units was consumed by his elemental spirits. So the remaining units is 620. But, the system consumed 100 units, so the balance is 520 units. Thats why it's shows 520 in hologram.
" If 100 units were consumed, it's 620 units, then the remaining 380 units were, may be absorbed by the elemental spirits", Ajax felt regret because he didn't know beforehand that the essence of nature can be used to strengthen the body and increase the body force, but there is no medicine for regret in this world. - VirgoGimini7mthCommented
The man is holding his breath while talking
"Listen Irene I know you must want to save your sister with your entire being but you should give up and stay here. Even if you did pull off a miracle and found her, rescuing her would be impossible. You should just stay here and we will help take care of you, it is already a miracle that you are alive you should not through your life away on a futile quest." - VirgoGimini7mthReplied to wizardpotato
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Marcus began trying everything he could to kill the bear but his threads could not pierce its body and his spark spell could only hurt the bear not finish it off. After a few minutes of trying to kill the bear Marcus finally thought of a way to do it although it was a horribly cruel method. However, it would have been crueler to leave the bear here to slowly starve so Marcus reluctantly forced the bears mouth shut with his threads and then covered its nose. The bear began to thrash around again with renewed strength as its breathing was sealed, unfortunately for the bear it could do nothing to stop its impending suffocation. After a few dozen minutes the bear's life came to an end and Marcus heard the familiar sound of leveling up. - VirgoGimini7mthReplied to thegodoftheneworld
can't understand sarcasm and a joke?
'Ha-ha yes I have done it my start has finally arrived I now have a physical form to use, the world will one day tremble before my power.' - VirgoGimini8mthReplied to Dragonlord89
more than 1. Are you dumb?
By the grace of Light, I never thought it would smell this bad, he thought to himself. His hand is still steady but sweats filled his forehead and his back - VirgoGimini8mthReplied to
more than 1. Are you dumb?
By the grace of Light, I never thought it would smell this bad, he thought to himself. His hand is still steady but sweats filled his forehead and his back - VirgoGimini9mthReplied to Moist_Possum
- VirgoGimini9mthCommented
Aha!
'Also, he understands that Agarthians dream about going above ground, so he is using this opportunity to bait them to join his Guild and expand his forces. Simply put, our Kingdom is the best recruitment place for his Guild, and once he has gained countless strong members, he could potentially use it to conquer territories in the Surface World!' - VirgoGimini9mthCommented< Would you like to join the Mythical Guild, Heaven's Gate? >
- VirgoGimini9mthCommentedFor Eiko, the only weapon she needed was her Bombs, and that was more than enough to make her enemies go Boom!
- VirgoGimini9mthCommented
smack!
However, the Black Coffin wouldn't allow anyone to stop it, so it smacked Michael and sent him flying in the opposite direction of the arena.