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Honestly I really liked the intro, it was quite original but the pace is just way too fast, I mean there is no struggle or hardship the character faces, the initial vibe given off from this story was an underdog type growth story but it all fell apart after he was hired. I really would have liked it the main character faced some hardship in battle. For ex he first is put into this elite squad and all of the sudden he is carrying them on his back and beating creatures that normally one would take years of practice and experience to beat. spoiler warning ⚠️ ( It was hinted that he was about to fight a dragon king I mean, I don't care how talented he is, but going a after a "dragon king " right after your 1st expedition is absurd and plot armor at its finest. A pretty mediocre story with great potential if you ask me 🤷♂️