Cynrhel
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Cynrhel2yrReplied to CYPHER_OCTAGON- Cynrhel2yrPosted
What can I say aside from "amazing"? Sci-fi isn’t as easy to write as something can think it is. The synopsis is so-so in terms of writing but the message that it’s telling us, which is the current situation of humans, etc. but it can be proofread and revised and it’ll be easy to understand. The author knows it himself that there’s grammatical errors and yes, it’s improving. Despite those, the details, scenes, and messages that he wanted to convey were still there and just by managing to do it is already enough to make us read the rest of the chapters. The first two chapters didn’t fail me, like bro- it’s amazing. I was amazed. Go read it now!
This book has been deleted. - Cynrhel2yrReplied to Blue_kat248
Thank you and have a great day to you too!
Asami quickly went to him and grabbed Ichinose's shoulder to prevent him from falling on the bricks. Ichinose was startled and embarrassed that his face became red. - Cynrhel2yrReplied to Blue_kat248
Hello
Asami quickly went to him and grabbed Ichinose's shoulder to prevent him from falling on the bricks. Ichinose was startled and embarrassed that his face became red. - Cynrhel2yrReplied to Desitine
:) <3
"Oh my god! Let me enjoy this moment with him. Gee, my heart is jumping out of me." he said to himself, "Please stop jumping! Stop my heart and relax!" he added the feeling of warm fuzzies that he felt overjoyed. - Cynrhel2yrReplied to Desitine
Thank you so much that you like it :)
As they were having a nice talk, suddenly it became the last hour of light before sunset. Sometimes this is called the "Golden Hour", which is the period of daytime shortly after sunrise or before sunset, during which daylight is redder and the sunset is softer than when the sun is higher in the sky. The golden hour is also sometimes called the "magic hour," especially by most cinematographers. - Cynrhel2yrReplied to Fujoshi_Chan_8640
- Cynrhel2yrReplied to Desitine
I won't say it but you'll see it soon, dear <3
He suddenly feels awkward and tense now that he doesn't know why Asami is looking at him. He tried to hide the embarrassment like nothing happened and continued to blow the smoke away. To Ichinose, Asami is totally his ideal man, now that Asami is already an adult. Ichinose now thinks about Asami's body... his muscular chest and biceps, his broad shoulders, those attractive lips, jaw line, nose, and his blue eyes which only added more alluring when you look at him. He got an electric shock flowing in his back when he saw that Asami was still looking at him. - Cynrhel2yrReplied to wanderingreader
hehehe
Ichinose then says, "Master Asami, how do you like the idea of adding more pink, yellow, magenta or red roses near the entrance to make it more attractive and the aroma of the roses when the wind blows, it might be refreshing for the afternoon relaxation. Can you consider it?"