The general story itself is pretty good but the writing quality leaves much to be desired. It makes it difficult to read because the writing is very choppy.

goodness! One would hope one family member wouldn't betray the other...yikes!

really like this storyline so far, I first came in contact with the concept of this story through an advertisement on YouTube for the app. I didn't know what I was expecting but this is definitely a lot more interesting than I could have hoped for.