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Zomkiler10mthCommentedAshton(MC) seems like a puppet a, pawn in someones game, already on a predestined path. like with the system telling him heβll have to figure certain information out by himself, choosing not to tell him, that by it self would be ok as other system novels do it with β??????β but the system is clearly sentient as it makes jokes in identify description and talks, so there is no reason for ashton not to know that the system could help. like if the system told him it could help him but there would be rewards if Ashton did it by himself that would make more sense or Ashton wouldnβt find out sooner and didnt have a sentient system and so didnβt know cause he didnt ask. And the reason i said he seems like hes on a predestined path is because in the begginer gift package it says give the badge to a specific agent and say specific things. what would of happened if he said something different or gave it to a different person? also the system said the Ashton was faster than expected like who is expecting this from him, itβs clearly someone as it didnβt say faster than someone with your talent or faster than average person. and finally the bot upgrade thing like it said just give it to jeff heβll know what to do with it,like no information like thats itβs something that a civilization in a galaxy far away used for their trash bots,but nothing. Like as the system rewards seem to be stuff from his world like the money and stuff it would be better if the description just said something like β Upgrade module used for robots created by βBLANKβ typically used by the federation to upgrade combat robots. alright if you read this far thanks i just find these very annoying.
[Although there are plenty of room for improvement, connecting all your Mana Coils in one sitting is a worthy achievement. You did better than expected, Host.]- Zomkiler11mthCommented
how does every always know his spirit roots specific grade without test or anything? Just one look is enough to know?
In his perception, this person had a medium-grade spiritual root and was worth nurturing. However, he did not care about it too much because it wasn't a high grade spiritual root. If Song Shi had a high grade spiritual root, it would be a different story. - Zomkiler1yrCommented
*sigh* Why did you have to put a classic traumatic past and why did you have mc telling his business to people who just met and he's not even experienced it he saw these memories from a movie and the mc clearly didn't like him like all he did was draw more attention to himself
Ch 2 CH-2 - Zomkiler2yrCommented
this reminded me of GTA IV Bank Robbery
The robber didn't have time to react so he carelessly aimed his gun at where the man was, then he shot without taking aim. The idiot was unlucky, because that shot went through his chest, and hit his heart. He died instantly. - Zomkiler2yrCommentedCh 2 Legacy and Rebirth
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he slipped up. he didn't go in CDC to meet the doctor
"I hate to be the bringer of bad news, Hershel, but everybody dies before they transform into a walker." Xenon said calmly. "The researcher at the CDC has already confirmed this. I am sorry for your family but if they've transformed, they are regrettably... already dead." - Zomkiler2yrCommentedCh 18 To Kill or Not to Kill
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BRUH
"I like girls with bigger breasts," I said honestly, completely ruining the mood that we had built up.Β - Zomkiler2yrPosted
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