Hi! It's me Fenly Kim! Hey you did a good beginning, babe. But better than you put the title in chapter with a interesting title, not only chapter one. But overall it's good! Keep going!

Humhumhum I'm coming!! Hm, this is romance book, right? I think that's story tell about love triangle, so ... it must be excited! And also your sentences and description is pretty good, actually good, but that's little bit much I guess. But overall its exellent! Keep going!

But overall, that's plot is very good. You did a good sentences. So keep going!!!

Hi this is fenly kim! okay I arrived here and here my review! hehe I already read the blurb, then I was imagine how cute they meet the dragon. Haha. And I very excited when they survive from the villain, that's make me heat beat for waiting next chapter!

*typo is everywhere : story

This is Kimmy Yamashira. I came to review ur book [img=recommend] Hey, that's book is soooo good. Very intense and myterious. So curious atmosphere in the storu, and actually I love your pretty idea. o keep going!

yes! hehe

Lagipula, itu di daerah yg saljunya lebat banget kak. Biasanya tingginya ampe bermeter2, jadi mobil gak bisa masuk. Harus ada mobil pemecah es yg lewat. Klo pake kereta kuda, atau kadang rusa bertanduk, itu bisa dipecah. Karena mereka kuat

oh, ini karena di daerah salju kak. Kereta salju itu masih dipake biasanya, karena lebih strong. Ada beberapa hewan yg bisa memecah es

This is Kimmy Yamashira. I told you, I've already read your blurb and chapter one. For the beginning, I think its sooo beautiful words and sentences. This setting place that can make the readers feeling the story for more. I can imagine the characters pain, that's awesome. You did a good job! Keep going! [img=recommend]

oh yes, thank you. I'll edit that 🙏🥰

Kimmy Yamashira here! For the first review, I saw the cover is so pretty. It's describe your contents of you book, that's good. Then, I feel sorry because there's no blurb here. Maybe you can put blurb for introduce your story. Sometimes, a readers like to follow a story with a good and exciting opening from the blurb. Hehe. But overall, that's really awesome story! Keep going!

Thanks [img=recommend]

Kimmy Yamashira here! I already read a blurb and chapter one. Lemme say you did a good sentences. Very pretty structure. The plot and oping is so good, very mysterious, so I can feel the atmosphere. You did a good jon and I want more chapters soon! Keep going! [img=recommend]

For sure, if I get contract soon wkwk

Kimmy Yamashira here! I reviewed as Fenly_Arismaya, is that okay? Fine, here my review. First when I read blurb, I love that detail physic of character. But I need more chapter, so you keep going ur chapter 😬

Kenapa? Anda kecewa kalau saya perempuan, ya? Wkwkwk. Banyak yang zonk dan banyak yang godain lho pas aku jadi cowok wkwkwk pen ngakak rasanya

my plasureee

yes thanksss [img=recommend]

yes [img=recommend] Ssstt tapi aq nyamar jadi org luar. Jadi cowok pula 🤣 Actually I'm girl