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Wake up to reality. Nothing ever goes as planned in this world. The longer you live, the more you realize that in this reality, only pain, suffering and futility exist.
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reboot233dCommentedYou don't use "and more " in a story. For a better reading experience for readers, try to show what the characters are seeing.
There were also some emergency medication for inflammation and diarrhea, a solar power bank, a flashlight, binoculars, and more.- reboot233dCommented
Oh my god..
The set of punches he practiced was called the Golden Elephant Body Forging Technique. - reboot233dCommented
Willingly huh... 😒
If the other party was a human, he could also use it to send suggestive commands, gradually achieving the effect of subconscious hypnosis over time. - reboot233dCommented
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"What?" Elijah turned to look at her, noticing a blush on her pale face. - reboot233dReplied to Jayiel
That's the only way to explain her unrealistic actions.
So, seeing Elijah drag Alexander's body to the window and then push it out with effort, she didn't say anything more. - reboot2314dCommented
Bullshit.
"I've hacked into the security grid. The best way out is through the vents. Follow me." - reboot2317dCommentedCh 26 “The Darkness Lurking in People’s Hearts”
- reboot231mthCommented"Zane! You're the only one here who is armed! And like it or not, you are also the only one here cold-blooded enough to murder his former classmates without remorse… We need you, Zane..."
- reboot231mthCommented
cringe
"Touch me again and you'll regret it," Mike said low and even. - reboot232mthCommented
Okay, the "a bit" thing is getting quite annoying.
"For now...we can only wait for him to make up his mind, It's time for us to go to Herta's space station, maybe someone there could help him." Welt sighed a bit, slightly understanding Ryan's situation. "March, Dan Heng, get ready for the Jump" - reboot232mthCommented"Nghhh..."
- reboot232mthReplied to Juan_llamasAs Himeko finished with the bandages, he backed away slightly, letting Welt give the boy CPR, and after a few seconds he started to cough again, water coming out from his mouth, Welt backed away a bit, as the boy stopped, slowly opening his eyes, showing a pair of deep blue eyes.
- reboot232mthReplied to nasapeepolover_116
Be confident in what you say mate. Don't try to justify your answers by saying that's what someone else says. 'He/she says' holds no ground. But yes, this is correct.
Rias heard everything from the distance and shouted, "What the hell was that!!? And when did you took it, you crazy bastard!? Besides, that's illegal! I'm suing you!" - reboot232mthReplied to Hail_The_loli
Did you fix it though?
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How does the last sentence make any sense? "I thought you were a pervert who doesn't like women." ...What? She's a pervert because she doesn't like women? How is this sensable.
This paragraph has been deleted. - reboot235mthReplied to DaoistcaqwL5
He didn't. He had no reason to cripple his village. Or maybe he did I don't know as I understand Danzo's reasons more.
His initial impulse was to execute Danzo for treason, but after a discussion, he couldn't bring himself to do it. While he removed him from the council and disbanded the Root, Hiruzen knew it wouldn't be enough. - reboot235mthReplied to DRAVIDIAN
It's not that it's hard per se. It's more of whether or not you can be logical. If you can't then don't bother trying writing an intelligent character.
The first problem is that I have to keep my new identity a secret. According to the previous memories, there is a clan in the village, the Yamanakas, who can read my mind and are used as psychiatrists. After an incident like that, I am sure that they will demand to examine me to check if I am a liability to the village. - reboot235mthCommented
Not 72 hours?
He proceeded to use his Tsukuyomi for the first time. For 48 hours, he showed Sasuke the death of his clan. He knew how much Sasuke loved him, but this love would lead his brother to his death. If Sasuke started asking questions and found out the truth, he would proceed to destroy the village, and Itachi already knew the outcome. His brother would die. The other option was to take Sasuke away. However, the life of a missing nin, a ninja who will join the Akatsuki, is not suitable for children.