NotoriousDaoist
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i got tricked..I got backstabbed..and i got quite possibly bamboozled πππthe novel cover had a sci-fic tight-suit lady with some delicious cake but the novel is a serious one and no r18 :( .... well I ain't gonna complain I will save this one till I'm in the mood for serious action again....well..after like hundreds of serious action novels im now craving r18 ones as a change of mood ...soooo... see you later bro π«΅π i will make sure to binge read your novel after I'm done exterminating my r18 collectionπ€πππ
well..it would have been quite good if u wrote it as "MC was an old cultivator that reached the peak and since u want him to be from modern world to know about ATG then it will be that earth regained it's spiritual energy long ago and MC rose to the peak of cultivation through the help of his system and has knowledge of many cultivation techniques etc and is wise enough as he is already very old then after his death the system reincarnated him in the ATG world that he read about whatever novel or anime in his childhood before he became a cultivator or before becoming someone formidable...then...as he was an apex cultivator even his comprehension is excellent and he will habe no problem assimilating Yun Che's memories as it will be trivial for someone that was once strong enough ( even without him doing anything---"a system can assimilate the memories for him while protecting his consciousness since the system could keep his soul like this...protect and seal his body while healing it and even reincarnate him---surely it will be a work in the park for the system to make him take the memories easily....and that would have been the perfect start of u wanted the MC to have been from a modern background while being someone with capabilities...Then after that the bleach powers would have been a bonus for fun to add some light-hearted sense to the story and then comes the harem with proper interactions....then action and faceslapping the old ancestors and young masters and well...the rest of the novel u know........THAT WAS MY HONEST OPINION THO...oh well .it is what it is and i have no right to complain since it's your fanfic and im just reading it in my free time .. well...we aren't perfect..we learn step by step...so good luck and keep it up π€π
nah ig smth like military strategies or smth like the strategies of the art of war and this bs xd