so far book is good read.very entertaining

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

i will agree the eye whispering part never seen before..i had run bathroom started laughing..offended my kitten who was next to me..i choked on laughter

you need be more careful of your grammar sugar.I know you are wanting to push out your chapters for your fans but also remember quality not just quantity.Proofread your works so when you write larger novels your works will improve as you go not get worse.

since I am an introvert I am very Known for talking to myself..thankfully no one has talked back lol..much.Your story so far is entertaining and I am looking forward to meeting this unusual female lead.I myself am contemplating on sending in a few chapters to see how they take but my mind has not quite been made up yet.

so far very humourous and more to my liking than the other books have read so far.

usually those who have been hurt the most strike out at those who are innocent.some regret some do not.instead ponder on the importance of the young girl in picture who he feels honour bound to avenge