In my view, this would have a certain problem as it would involve several timelines, such as: The timeline of the novel that Clark (MC) read. The current timeline where we are reading about him waking up in Dominic's body. This theory of yours where Célestin went back in time. But I believe he didn't go back in time because he would have taken the artifacts that the MC is collecting beforehand and would be able to predict the movements of the umbrascourge, as in the novel's timeline, he naturally acquired them without the umbrascourge's interference.

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Regarding Célestin, I think of him for now as someone very optimistic and a bit eccentric, I would say. As for the character you want to include, there is no other guy who gave more Power Stones than me, the DaoistWnj1OX...

Oh, this caught me off guard... I need to think a bit about it, besides that I am grateful. Can you add me on Discord? So we can chat better

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Well, I would say it's Uther, Arthur's father, since he is somewhat rigid, like a stone at the bottom of a river. The river changes over time, but the stone remains the same, resisting the passage of time. Similarly, people without mana can also be important (for rituals and such) to society as a whole.

The main character is very pragmatic and serious. I'm finding it interesting how he is dealing with his new identity, but I think he should delve a little deeper into an interpersonal relationship with his family. Chaps 28.

Where it is noon for you, it is one o'clock in the morning for me, but any time you post it I can read it.

I think Arthur needs a simple acknowledgment saying that he's already quite amazing and that everyone has their time in life. Besides, I only just realized the reference to him with the legend of King Arthur

I think Dominic will take him back to his universe through a Stargate, or he'll be randomly kidnapped on the street and used for some experiment that harnesses the life energy of manaless individuals (since he lacks mana, what else would he serve for?) to power some ritual.

I think the idea of the other version of him as a child a bit far-fetched

I just got this image in my head of Neo from Matrix firing away with the time slow

it reminded me of Zatanna saying words backwards

oh my bad i thought you from the USA

you post a new chapter at 1 am...

It amazes me that no one talks about MC's staff, like they don't wonder where he got that from?

Okay, that's different from the xianxia works I've seen around. This novel is calm and peaceful at first, it has a slice of life where the protagonist isn't just thinking about raising her cultivation level and shit. The action/fight scenes, although few, are decent. (I think there should be at least a few chapters focusing on cultivation, in a way that talks about how her technique works in more depth, etc.) Keep up the good work. (I don't speak english Sorry for the bas grammar) With 23 chapters

I think you've traveled a bit about the spirit world becoming the tower, but I believe it could be a combination of several worlds

This pause the MC is taking is a good thing for his mind, but I feel like something is missing, like he needs to be clear with himself. Thanks for the chapter keep up the good work

I thought it would take another 4 chapters to kill the wolf (counting from the chapter I commented on earlier), this way of increasing his power was a bit sudden, (at least for me) which I can see was something planned at the last minute. Sorry about the grammar, I don't understand much English, But keep up the good work. Good Lucky