Dude I really loved your story, it is very well written, the development of technology is really amazing, the explanation of how the items are made too and wonderful
And a good story, a little generic but fun, look, I'm not a professional critic and stuff and I'm not the best person to kick things off and that's why this thing about the app forces you to put 140 characters and a bag
I really liked the story, it develops well and has captivating and interesting characters and you can identify with them even with them living in a world very different from ours
I found it very interesting the story is very captivating and well written the characters are interesting so far I haven't found anything to complain about