You have to be trying to end up malnourished in the US the only people that are malnourished are drug adicts and abused children there are so many ways to obtain food very easily and even free if you get food stamps which is unbelievably easy to do.

Short*

Your inability to not have a cliff hanger is your largest shirt coming as a writer your story has little to no flow at all because you end every chapter at the climax

More clean and fluid lore here than on actual destiny phenomenal writing

I love the story but honestly the shortness and the timing of the cliffhangers kill the flow of the story. This is like the third time you have ended the chapter not only in the middle of a fight but at the climax.