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A good fanfic is one that you can read and enjoy even though you haven't even read the original story.
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I looked up the first pair of noise cancelling headphones and google told me that Bose made them in 1989. This was a quick google search by the way and not any extensive research. So, I could be wrong.
I wonder if this is talking about the woman at the Kengan match or Misaki?
Getting that juice
Enhanced grip huh. hmmmmmmmmmm
is this going to still keep to one chapter a month. It's such a shame if that's the case.
This is so true. Imagine someone breaks into your house and you call the cops, but by the time they made it there you were already either kidnapped or murdered or beat up. All depends on your imagination. Any of those incidences can happen and it will be too late.
I recommend that you introduce the character in a different way. This just isn't that nice to read.
A ticking time bomb
I've heard that if its hard to concentrate than having something to fiddle with in your hands while concentrating helps a bit. For example if you have a ball to move around in your hand while doing some homework helps me a lot. Basically a fidget toy that helps you concentrate.
This gives me major Austin Powers vibes but I could be wrong.
I like the twist coming out of no where. Gave me a good laugh. I think shagrat will be a good choice lol