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borgroc and marigold
didn't nell use steam engine back in the second tournament
over the net not under
burgundy not burnice
nira never knew about the favor token and didn't want to know
Ingrid and Monica's uncle that raped mainica
not leon this is his father
* smile not smoke
misty and sandra
* be best* last line
Half as may People not Twice as many.
level 2 and level 3 not 4 and 5
griphin
why over reaction
spear is in spirit conscious
you don't need this plot element no point he could have stabbed it with his spear
he saw the summons back in the cave
love this this is good but don't drag out the duel between him and the system we need a winner soon