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Gumbus

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I've read a lot of fanfics and decided to throw my hat in the ring

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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus2mth
    Replied to JManM

    I re-read it after the last chapter came out and blazed through it. the fact that you were able to make a nearly 140K word work feel short is a testament to the quality of the story.

    altalt
    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
    Book&Literature · JManM
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus10mth
    Commented

    Yes to Questionable questing. half a no to the lewds

    I find my Lewds writing quite poor, and I don't think my current obsession will help due to it being a Waifu Catalog story and that genre being hentai as fuck. Would anyone truly be interested in me novelizing hentai? Also would anyone want me to post that story here as I was going to post it on Questionable Questing?
    altalt
    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus11mth
    Commented

    any news on the next chapter?

    Ch 39 Inkling
    altalt
    Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus11mth
    Commented

    This is probably one of the best stories on this sight. Keep up the good work!

    Ch 31 Brush
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    Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus11mth
    Commented

    hard facts

    'wHeN nExT cHaPtEr?!'
    altalt
    Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus11mth
    Commented

    Id recommend moving this chapter to the information section, so that it doesn't break up the flow of chapters. Liking the story thus far!

    Ch 3 word count - ignore
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    marvel's dictator
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    do you have an update schedule for this story, I crave more!

    Ch 18 Blood Fury Delirium
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter! Which number son is Gelmar again?

    We locked eyes and I nodded. He nodded back and together we sought out delicious eggs and bacon.
    altalt
    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
    Book&Literature · JManM
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    I feel like regular tournaments are tamer compared to the absolute ragers of fights that took place under big bobby B. The rewards were probably obscene enough to drive the contestants to more permanent solutions in the tourneys at the capital rather than the flowery ones held in the reach.

    Up next is the tournament people have been waiting for. I'll do each event, and we'll see if I have the attention to detail to pull it off. I was fairly bothered by the weapons used in the melee for HotD. You can't make a flail safe, the same way you cant make a mace or hammer safe, for tournament use. Tournaments are supposed to be sporting events. So are melees in Planetos just blood sport were people are expected to pull their punches, but murder is just boys being boys?
    altalt
    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter! I can't wait to see the tournament arc

    Ch 19 The Green Dream
    altalt
    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
    Book&Literature · JManM
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Replied to Aces_Mark

    I feel like right now would be when he would pay the most, the mines are probably still yielding gold and he hasn't been giving loans to Big Bobby B

    Ch 17 The Greatest Raid
    altalt
    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    I enjoy these types of chapters but I feel like they need to be longer to be justified. I love worldbuilding and specifics on how the mc is getting what they need but if it's a short chapter where only one trade thing happens then a bit of set dressing it feels not very satisfying. Thanks for the chapter super chiefQ

    Ch 8 To Lannisport
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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    Cant wait to see him raise his sons, all potential giga chads in the making

    Ch 5 Northern Gold
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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter! don't need to be a genius to employ the scientific method and figure stuff out, I would love to see some interesting stuff done with Westerosi materials that may not be feasible in our world

    Ch 4 A Chummy Fall
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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Posted

    Off to a great start, far too many GoT fics that follow the same beats. I can't wait to see how this one goes differently. Jmanm has all of the consistency so if you're going to read a fic read a Jmanm fic,

    altalt
    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    I'll read anything you put out, hope you have fun with this story! even if you don't revolutionize agriculture warfare aint too much harder, one of Genghis Khan's generals basically invented charging with artillery cover, and then that strategy was never used again for like 500 years.

    Ch 1 Well, That Answers That Question
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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    missing this story super chief

    Ch 57 Interlude: Land of the Elves
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    In Cyberpunk With Fallout System
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    if you are doing a Waifu collection check out cherico on Questionable questing, hes got a bunch of stories based around the company. rapturous-rhapsody by readingdangerously is around 300k words and has some unique concepts for a WC story. For the overlord setting, will it be an isekai into a world where you will then isekai later on after making the PC in Yggdrasil or will it be straight to fantasy?

    Ch 56 Quick Question
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    In Cyberpunk With Fallout System
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    Is the new release schedule every 3 days now? I wanna know how often Ill have to refresh this page to get my fix of this story!

    Ch 44 Beginning to Feel like a Melee God, Melee God
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    In Cyberpunk With Fallout System
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  • Gumbus
    Gumbus1yr
    Commented

    Would love to see a chad tyrion throwing horses with that dummy thicc dwarf strength

    Or a Tyrion krumping everyone that he wants to?
    altalt
    In Cyberpunk With Fallout System
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