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bootsntruff

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  • bootsntruff
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    Replied to Sazukii_Hachiga

    I'm sure it will have great use, but like usual, Lex will forget about it until he needs it most. It's good foreshadowing. I don't know if he'll make an inn but I could see it coming into play as a defensive tactic of some sorts.

    But ultimately that too was just a novelty item, and did not attract his attention the way the book did. After parting ways with the two old men, and wishing them luck, Leo returned to his apartment and removed his glasses, once again returning to his baby size.
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    The Innkeeper
    Fantasy Ā· lifesketcher
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    Its's kind of frustrating that given how Warden realized his affinity for the spear through wielding one, he wouldn't try that with other weapons after his first class.

    Ch 85 DragonForge
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    Heaven's Greatest Professor
    Fantasy Ā· EG0
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    the use of "would" here and in previous instances is really jarring when you can just say "will."

    "I would remain in the gymnasium for some more time to train," Warden told the students, "The class is dismissed, but you are open to training as well."
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    Heaven's Greatest Professor
    Fantasy Ā· EG0
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    jaded doesn't seem to be the right word choice here.

    He quickly checked the map and found it. He thought he would be jaded by now, seeing all the different massive halls, but, he was still surprised when he saw the Alchemy Hall. Perhaps more than everything else he had seen in the sect valley.
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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games Ā· Snoring_Panda
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    MC is being careless again. smh It might be a good idea to add learning the worth of various items to his todo list.

    His second work in the sect valley was to learn how to become an alchemist's aide. But, he now had to wait until he found out what the yellow rock was.Ā 
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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games Ā· Snoring_Panda
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    "illegible" not ineligible

    The book seemed to be written in ineligible alphabets, but for some reason, when he saw it, he understood what they meant. In fact, reading these ineligible words was much faster in his opinion.Ā 
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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games Ā· Snoring_Panda
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    is it just me worrying about whether he is harvesting correctly? iImean he is a farmer so perhaps it's implied but....he's also kinda...recklessly carefree... šŸ˜¬

    'Woah,' he slowly plucked the flower from the plant and took a closer look at it. 'This must be a very good alchemy material for me to get this fantastic of a feeling.'
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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games Ā· Snoring_Panda
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    I know we're being presented this bumbling, naive , country boy but really...use the Internet to find out some basics. Willful ignorance is annoying.

    He believed he was essentially around level 15 in the game. But, he couldn't tell how much further he had to level up since he had no idea about the higher levels.Ā 
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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games Ā· Snoring_Panda
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    ah the authors note makes things a little clearer. the story is interesting so far. There is quite a lot of sentence structure that on a read through would be jarring, so future edits are good. thanks for writing.

    Ch 10 Aftermath
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    Heaven's Greatest Professor
    Fantasy Ā· EG0
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    "appalled" is definitely no the correct word choice here. perhaps "enthralled"

    With the villagers saved, they became appalled with the man in the dark clock fighting their arch-enemy. They forget to put off the fire and watch them battle. But not all of them were clueless or appalled to losing their mind, a boy, no older than fifteen, seemed to have regained his wits before anyone else and shot arrows at the beast.Ā 
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    Heaven's Greatest Professor
    Fantasy Ā· EG0
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    i wish this hadn't been off screen. i found that exchange interesting.

    The agreement was an equal contract but Yang Xu was the master while it was his soul avatar.
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    Transcending 10,000 Daos [BL]
    LGBT+ Ā· Muthoni_Murira
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    that might be better for YNs swordsmanship.

    From the little he knew, the sand of time could accelerate and decelerate time.
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    Transcending 10,000 Daos [BL]
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    for real it's been more than 3 years and she never once looked for him? šŸ˜®ā€šŸ’Ø

    'What a good disciple.' She thought, and her eyes turned cold.
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    Transcending 10,000 Daos [BL]
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 172 Negative Distance
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    Transcending 10,000 Daos [BL]
    LGBT+ Ā· Muthoni_Murira
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    I'm not crying. nope...not at all šŸ˜­

    Although they didn't have the chance to worship in person, he liked that Yu Nianzhen had gone out of his way to place their portraits on the altar.
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    Transcending 10,000 Daos [BL]
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    ooo I'm looking forward to that. wonder what kind of currency void dwellers use...

    The orb ride was not long, and felt even shorter due to the incredible and enchanting views along the way. It was an enchanting experience, and Lex looked forward to the challenge of creating a space inside his Inn where Void dwellers could also come on vacation.
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    The Innkeeper
    Fantasy Ā· lifesketcher
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    is this another kind of system ?

    "Sleep," she said, her voice filled with echoes of power. The figure attempted to resist, but ultimately could not. The temple was special in that way. The fact that it was used to train humans was a front. Its real value came from the fact that it was essentially a controllable self-contained realm, with all its laws at the whim of its controller.
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    The Innkeeper
    Fantasy Ā· lifesketcher
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚ get him fenrir!

    Some distance away, Ra reappeared, his body much smaller this time but he did not seem to care. He almost smiled and gloated, but before he could he felt jaws clamping around his neck once again.
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    The Innkeeper
    Fantasy Ā· lifesketcher
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    hopefully one day he'll have someone he can trust fully. other than inn staff that is

    Even if deep down, he felt that he should trust Mateo and Cassandra, Lex just could not. After all, if his parents could keep secrets from him, why couldn't others?
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    The Innkeeper
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  • bootsntruff
    bootsntruff1mth
    Commented

    šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£

    'That sword can no longer be used.' He thought.
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    Transcending 10,000 Daos [BL]
    LGBT+ Ā· Muthoni_Murira
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