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LittleTrol1mthReplied to surlochCh 1 Chapter 1: Mr. Han_1- LittleTrol2mthReplied to AmonRas
I mean we accept that new worlds have humans so why not
"One serving of tomato juice, one freshly squeezed lemon juice, one serving of Worcestershire sauce, one Tabasco and salt, and pepper." - LittleTrol2mthCommented
Aha! The real reason behind giving 30% to her!
"Lucia's family is a large clan." - LittleTrol2mthReplied to blindside
I mean he just explained why he's letting her off for the time being.
This grudge must be avenged! - LittleTrol6mthReplied to Exi_Nexi
Based on the context in the following chapters it's a giveaway that you enter by typing the words "wishing blah blah a happy marriage" . Or maybe everyone that types that gets a certain amount of money the first time they do.
Then, Suri performed another surprising action. She sent a password lucky money. - LittleTrol7mthCommented
You successfully shanked me in the feels
[Author note: "For 'I,' at this moment, am truly free."Mei Wenxiu, a Mortal Girl. ] - LittleTrol9mthPosted
Essentially the same premise of Godlike Player in a Game Like World with a young and a bit dumb assassin MC instead of a pro gamer. Woke up in trash young master that got kicked out of elite family. Teleported to trial and abandoned by teammates for looking useless. Aced trial and teammates think he's an elite from his family. Wants to be a master of all. Has maid that hates him for being useless. Goes to black market. I stopped reading here since as previously stated the MC is a bit too dumb/naive for my taste but you can see the similarities in the story. Wish the author the best of luck but this MC ain't for me.
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Jimmy Carr is that you?
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While I appreciate the sentiment it's a bit extreme. If I don't prove myself useful feel free to kick me out would probably have been better
"I'm a blacksmith- I mean, I was one before teleporting here," Shinon replied. "I know how to work with metal and forge weapons and armour. I could help you make better weapons to fight the zombies. If I don't prove useful, feel free to kill me." - LittleTrol10mthCommented
How does he know they're terrible?
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Didn't he have a memory that was just as good as photographic memory?
“S-Sounds fun,” Ethan replied. “He didn’t take the Potion Making Class because he wasn’t that good at memorizing things. Also, he didn’t have the patience to mix things together to try to create potions. - LittleTrol11mthPosted
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Might have had
He was more interested in the extraction of the Gogi Lord's Battle Axe and the Bilrox feathers. The Gogi Lord's body was not covered in Bilrox feathers, but the storage space of his War Rune might Bilrox feathers stored in it! - LittleTrol11mthCommented
For disappearing
Michael was deep in thought and didn't even notice that the youthful Elf called him out to disappear for such a long time. - LittleTrol11mthCommented
I think you mean "and while the enchantment was in place" otherwise it reads as if Wolfe is trying to place an enchantment instead of fighting the one that is active which I believe is what's happening
There weren't all that many witches in the Morgana Coven that were stronger than Wolfe was, and until the enchantment was in place, it was a test of pure power to see who would prevail between the spellcaster and Wolfe. - LittleTrol11mthCommented
I think you used one negative too many. So the way you have it now is that he IS denying that it WAS one of his reasons
"That was not my main intention but I won't deny that it wasn't one of my reasons for giving you the bird." - LittleTrol11mthCommented
Can't help but feel like the author is constantly retconning
"Alright," Evan said as he reached out and tapped the dusty ring on his finger. The ring was also disguised by the face changer. Its actual form was beautiful beyond words, with the insignia of the Imperial Frost Clan on top of it. It was one of the many gifts Evan had received from his father over the years. It was an advanced piece of technology that contained a subspace the size of a room. - LittleTrol11mthCommented
Yeah, well, you clearly ain't doing anything about it
"You dare disrespect the crown prince in my presence?!" - LittleTrol11mthReplied to Imoesi
Haha I was upset since I thought the same. Like, at least include it in the description of the character instead of just blurting it out in an author's note
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