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Plot_armour Tbh the sole fact that he could do something like merging fking souls in such a short time is already retarded. God literally gave him the talents he own. He shouldn't be able to share as it should be in the core of his soul not in some cornor of his soul. Tbh this whole merging thing was just unnecessary. It would have been way way better if konans individual talent was explored. In conan it was enough for her to become an s rank. If explored more it could probably make her quite op.in future mc could probably make her more powerful with his seals or something. He didn't touch senjetsu because it was dangerous but he touched his souls and merged them when he doesn't know shit about souls??? tbh I like the story so I won't drop but this soul thingy took it down to four star for me. It was too forced. He should just remove the whole soul part as it doesn't affect much rn but his choice I guess 1yr 278 31 Yunick Yunick The first eight chapters are great and i would give a 5 stars if only I based on the first 8 chapters but after 9 is absolute trash he author go crazy after 9 ruining the history i never felt so frustrated with a author before, maybe the author of hunterxhunter too, but for the first time in my life I'm going to give someone a bad review after years on webnovel. I never liked to do it but this time he deserve it

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Diamond_Air Love it! Plot's great and as everyone else says, it updates frequently XD. Your work keeps improving too. Good job author and keep it up! Will be sticking with this one.

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Sage_Honos can't remember the last time I saw an original story in trial read. everything is just pure garbage now. if I could I would give 0 stars. 😠

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Zanetti Author Some useful information. #1 English is not even close to my main language, so don't expect good grammar, just something readable. #2 This fanfic, it's just something to pass the time, so I don't expect anything at the level of paid writers. #3 If you did not like the fanfic, just remove from your library. #4 Yes, the protagonist is not how you want him to be, and if you're feeling bad, write your own fanfic.

ManEater This is one of the best series I have ever read. And I have read a lot good series, chinese, japanese, korean etc. I believe that everyone that reads this will have bad points about this story, but if you look past the one or two bad parts, this is a great series, I would definently continue reading it.

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REDVI Typical plot where a chick comes in and just hangs onto the main character's legs and he just accepts it instantly how disappointing. Doesn't help either as he is also poor when he got transmigrated it's just so easy to guess what happens from then I'm just...

ManEater This is one of the best series I have ever read. And I have read a lot good series, chinese, japanese, korean etc. I believe that everyone that reads this will have bad points about this story, but if you look past the one or two bad parts, this is a great series, I would definently continue reading it.

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