Hey!!! I loved what you had on there. I went back to look through it and it's gone. what happened to it? where's the one we wrote together?

sue, Samuel, Jill, and Hillary need to leave these people alone and stop their scheming. it is ridiculous! these shameless people call themselves nobles? I disagree, I call them children!

I love how Lily tortures Quentin as well!

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I love this novel. It is very well pit together. I live the strength of the MC and the way she doesn't depend on a man to get things done. I would love to see more. Wonderful job. Keep up the good work. [img=recommend]

Wonderful writing. Very well put together. I love the characters and how the story builds around them. I can tell you put some good thought into your writing.. Well done my friend.

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I absolutely love this novel. It is well written and I love the video game aspect to it. It develops nicely and reads smoothly. I also enjoy the bits of humor throughout. Well done. [img=recommend]

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I love this novel. I love the video game feel to it. It's put together well and develops nicely. I wish I could come up with stuff like this to write about. Great job. 😉

I'm happy he finally got his pieces in place and I can't belive that kid took the dogs to the beast keeper. He really should have let the owner of the pets handle that. I'm curious of who the voice is. 🤔

I can see how this system overdrive is going to be a pain. Random quests being given to him all the time without the choice to follow through. This is going to be interesting.

Danton was pretty sly. I never even thought about him getting the orb. Ha ha. I also can't believe Veronica is hone already. I feel it's too soon. Ready for more as always. Keep it coming. [img=update]

I already voted. I would love to send you come coffee though. wonderful job. always ready for the next chapter. sounds like Danton's rage is starting to show.

It is so crazy how conceited Danton is. He just knows that he is going to be picked. I totally rolled my eyes with that. A part of me thinks he needs to be knocked down a few notches. I can't wait to read more.

I feel so bad for Danton, being humiliated in front of all the students and then being shown up by Ben. I know he he will become great.

I really hope that the conflict between Ben and the Grail family don't cause a problem in the kids' progression in school. I also hope that Dantons arrogant attitude doesn't get them all in trouble. I can't wait to see what happens next. Well done. I would also like to say that I love how we can see the stats if all the characters and their progression as they learn new skills.

So, it seems that Veronica is actually wanting to help Danton because of her past with his father. I hope I'm not wrong here. I am super excited to continue this journey. I love it!!

I find it amusing the way Danton talks to the Librarian. He is so arrogant towards her. I have a feeling he is going to eventually find out something about her that will either help him or get in the way of his goal. Hmmmm.

That was crazy. Poor kid had to see his dad die. I hope he pulverizes that jerk.