I honestly like how you pace things. You take the time to go into details where it is required to grasp your ideas. You don't go into overwhelming details when it is not required. I feel as if I am learning things with Michael as he encounters new issues, and it doesn't feel like he has a surprising major grasp on a new concept that is newly introduced. You make Michael relatable for any busy person who feels overwhelmed with all the tasks they need to complete on a daily basis.

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