Loved this story! Having the characters names go through alternative names at times and some grammar issues especially with tenses caused some confusion. Wish the story covered some areas a little more towards the end seemed to be wrapped up in a hurry, but other areas were very detailed and seemed to almost drag on.

I have completely loved this book! Some chapters, pages had spelling/grammar mistakes (just the English major in me). But the storyline was excellent and kept me reading for hours at a time and late at night. Great job! Congrats on completion!

I sure hope these plans work. Flynn's plan of revenge is sadly misplaced and people are getting hurt for the wrong reasons.

Concerned with the direction... Hoping love wins out over all cause NOT for nothing. All this trouble and drama, just seems so cliche. Also, the author needs to watch the gender tenses throughout this (so far) and spelling. Not just this chapter but all the chapters so far. It can make reading confusing.

When they both know... but won't share. and it seems like there are so many extra behind the scenes parties plotting against everyone... at this point how could anyone trust anyone?

I'll be honest the name flipping had me all confused. Emily, Aisha, Stacy. Story is good thus far just trying to keep everyone straight.

loving this book! wish her father had a better relationship with her but whatever. guess it's hard.

good character development. story line keeps your interest and keeps you coming back to learn what's next! updated in plenty of time for readability.

You would think with what happened to Elizabeth they would learn... but sure... let's play around. great idea... this will end well!