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AKira-Kira. Polish Author & Artist. Melancholic Hikikomori, Fujoshi, Misanthrope. Coffee-addict. Animal lovers. IG: @starlessbrokensky ArtIG: @lazyprince_art ArtFacebook: @DragonTreasures.Art
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I am sorry to hear it. English is not the language I use every day [I didn't use it at the time, as often as later], and especially at the beginning of writing when I had to switch to it, it could have affected the text more than I would have liked. In the rest of the text, I believe that it is better, so I can only encourage you to check the further chapters. Thank you for your opinion.
This is the first time when I hear about it. Personally, I have never experienced such a situation. Thanks for this interesting information.
Thank you for your reviews! I'm glad that you perceive descriptions in this way. I try to make them as good as possible. I will take your comments into account, but as an author who knows what she wants to convey, sometimes it is difficult for me to catch some things. As for the dialogues... - The future will show. 😉 Thank you for paying attention to the appearance of grammatical errors. I try to catch them all, but I don't always succeed, and sometimes even though I know something is wrong, I can't correct it well. [English is not my first language.] I hope these grammatical errors are not very numerous and don't take away the enjoyment of reading. Thank you very much for your kind words and appreciation of my writing!
Unfortunately, with the next chapter, this is the end of this story. On reflection, I found that leaving some things in a certain suspension was perfect for the story and fit for Gabriel's character. Thanks for reading my story about Gabriel. ^-^
How Gabriel behaves and most of what he does is his defense system, which as you can see, is sometimes focused on attacking others and hurting them verbally. He has built walls around himself to protect himself, and he has made his own way of defending himself. This system is often 'used' by him automatically, and sometimes even he himself does not realize that sometimes what he is doing or how he behaves is his defense system to protect him. [ I don't explain him, but I only explain on what basis he sometimes works. ]
I try my best to write in English, and I want to everyone be able to read what I write in a pleasant and understandable way so that everyone can get the greatest pleasure from this text and story. Maybe that's why I'm a little oversensitive about not making many mistakes. And a few years ago, I could hardly use English at all, and I'm still uncertain about it, so even though I assist myself in writing with various things, I'm still worried about whether the text is pleasant to read for the reader, etc. Sometimes, I feel that there are more errors in the text than usual, but I cannot find/correct them, so I can only apologize for them. Your words made me breathe a little, so thank you very much for them. ^-^