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Jemdins1yrCommentedGordon calmly said: "The Dante Act stipulates that under special circumstances, male and female prisoners are allowed to live together."- Jemdins1yrCommentedAs for peeking at a girls locker room? That was to observe the details of females' physiology for possible cross-dressing disguises later!
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fix your grammar, and then you'll probably have better reviews.
Author note'You know guys, i might soon drop this ff.. I'm not getting anything material from it , but only harsh words of few reviewer *wipe tears*. well, i will try to, not drop it before the end of second season,, Well, it was good to write it to you, but yea, ...Well probably second season is gonna last 8 chapters but yea... - Jemdins1yrCommented
no, you have not.
Author Note"I'm not sure if i spelled it right. - Jemdins1yrCommented
+1
2) I dedicate this time to a single novel. Meaning that I will post another chapter where y'all can vote on which one gets focused on. - Jemdins1yrReplied to NartlebI'm taking classes to get my CDL license.
- Jemdins1yrReplied to LustsiferChapter 1: Drifter (Revised)
- Jemdins1yrCommentedHe loaded an APCBC round into his cannon and eyed where he should shoot, trusting his instincts and experience in playing warthunder for years now, he let the travel towards the king taijitu.
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While the MC isn't a chad, nor smart enough to get everything he wants like some sort of mastermind, this story is what i think a accurate representation of a ordinary teen human being would be capable of is his situation, later in the story it's even adimitted that, even with his system boosting him, he isn't smart enough to quickly learn alchemy and magecraft. A lot of people will dislike the start of the story because of "beta MC". I believe that his situation of a mentally disaligned and traumatized child that got kidnapped from his family that doesn't have any talents is portrayed correctly, and the juice of the story is his pityful ass getting shit done, even if he doesn't make the best decisions most of the time, he later has to deal with the consequences and because of it he grows in power and character, later in the story, even while not growing to be a manipulative psychopath and still making mistakes, he becomes powerful enough to just middle-finger all his problems. And, to finish, a great part of this story is that all of his impactiful actions on the worlds he visits are told in detail, showing how his actions change the plot and lives of everyone around him, giving character delopment to everyone, making the much more alive and valuable than mob-characters and harem members.
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t a b le f l i p intensifies
Over the board, the white pieces were neatly arranged while the black ones were dispersed over the board with the black queen already dead and one pawn shining brightly with a blue light "Would he become a piece of this dammit board?" - Jemdins1yrCommented
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Reaching his home, Allen finally took out his suit. The Cicin Mage uniform was incredibly comfortable and regulated his temperature, but somehow, he felt that he loses some part of himself wearing it, preferring not to use it. - Jemdins1yrCommented
hmm... el pantalones
"L-lord Pantalone." - Jemdins1yrCommented
there's Ao3 too.
Lastly I'm planning on posting this story absolutely everywhere so if you know of any platforms where I can post this story then please tell me.] - Jemdins1yrCommentedCh 35 Chapter 35: The Abengers Part 8detailReincarnated as Genshin Impact Characters in MHA with Warframe SystemAnime & Comics · UnreliableRen