AlecV
we'll see how this goes
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Read books
because english grammar
particularly the futures past is infact inspired by yours
Hey Mad I've read your work and started my own, care to take a read?
the story building about background and stuff is amazing so far (let's hope this keeps up)
it's that gawk gawk 3000
i know it seems kind of harsh but they should leave Xings baby in thai world with the xie family to help keep the lineage alive (Author please do this) I think it'll allow for a chapter where xing and yang to come back to check on it (maybe this leads to a war between a power stronger than ever before)
To be more precise a j sound like huh but jee
wonder for what 😌
Zhu Mengyi is pronunces Zoo Men ge (hard g not soft g)
I didn't know orion could talk
adding on to the previous point what if the previous heir got 100% and wasn't mentally strong enough to contain the power and went insane? and that is why he's trapped in the temple?
what if the previous heir didn't die but go trapped because his soul/body could not handle the full bloodline? and because of this he's been trapped in the temple? what if Long chen is fated successfully achieve a 100% transformation? how powerful would he be?
Can you add the percentage the trials give because I'm curious
long chen has officially become an anti hero
Yes indeed, I was to lazy to fix that.
true while their are only few inconsistencies they do tend to be annoying when the di come up, I love this story so far.
Achievement get: Time stone GET
my man died a hero.
sorry for ruining 69 but don't you mean Cons-TRUCK-tion-kun?