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moldyolive2mthCommentedretail is the lowest margin least profitable consumer sector
The profits of the retail industry have always been very high, UU reading www.uukanshu. com even in the fiercely competitive 21st century, many small supermarkets in good locations, life is very nourishing.- moldyolive4mthCommented
lame
He went ahead to see another option of Recruitment where he could buy real human beings. Yes, actual human beings from different ethnicity, with different skills and professions and who spoke various languages from both his previous world and current world. - moldyolive4mthCommented
thats true in 2010 after the failure of Iraq when buried originally came out. in 2001 fresh fo 9/11 there was no anti war sentiment in America. the Afghan invasion was wildly popular
After the "9/11" incident, the anti-war sentiment among the American people became even stronger. However, the Washington authorities, with completely opposite thinking, didn't see it that way. They were, in fact, the biggest warmongers in the world. "Buried" aims to tell the conflicting core of a person who was attacked in Afghanistan but was forbidden to speak about their ordeal. - moldyolive4mthCommented
extremely dumb business move to give over first movers advantage.
However, Shin isn't overly concerned; in fact, he eagerly anticipates Tora's entry into the unfamiliar market before KiShin. He plans to let Tora develop and allow foreign markets to discover the appeal of Tora's well-executed but mostly mediocre video games. When KiShin eventually enters the foreign market with unique and high-quality games, people will inevitably compare them. After all, it's human nature to make comparisons, and through this comparison, KiShin will benefit. - moldyolive4mthReplied to Jugemu_jugemu
it should really be president, director, or just "head of merchandising"
But the story didn't end there. Ataraha's son, Yuji Tamanaka, had been a government-sponsored scholar at Harvard due to his exceptional intelligence. Upon returning to Japan, Yuji was surprised to find his father as a CEO. His father convinced him to join KiShin, and Ataraha introduced Yuji to Shin. The revelation that Yuji had studied at Harvard took Shin by surprise. - moldyolive5mthCommented
they had delivery texts in 1990?
They had a conversation for a while, and Shin excitedly observed the lively atmosphere around his Video Game Machines. Finally, he decided it was time to return to his apartment, especially when he received a text notification that his delivery had arrived. - moldyolive5mthCommented
you should stay in the story, breaking the fourth wall doesn't add anything here.
Obviously, a messenger was dispatched to the new capital of the reign, Naples; however, that messenger was not the man we are narrating about. - moldyolive5mthCommented
spears should really be the most common.
'600 of them will be trained by the Muslim contingent to at least become able to use their bow , as archers are what we need most. For the rest of the troops, I will train most of them to use the sword, as it is the biggest weapon spread around the army.As for those who use maces and axes, I do not think that they need to be taught how to use them since the base for them is really easy," reminisced Corrado as he started drifting off on how he would prepare his soldiers to fill the space created by the difference in skill as much as possible. - moldyolive5mthPosted
definitely one of the better historical fiction in terms of realism. more along the lines of the stories on alternatehistory.com then most of the stuff I've tried to read here.critically it doesn't have a bunch of cheesy ass I'm so edgy anime moments.there are some moments that would have been helped by a more thorough editing process; a couple instances of a paragraph more or less repeating a couple lines from a previous one. and some of the dialogue is a little unnatural, but only a minority.all and all, good stuff keep at it.
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that seems stupidly generous
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all and all good start to the story.but I Would say the transformation happened a little too quickly. I think you should have had MC spend a week or two in routine to build up his knowledge of the environment then spend maybe two three months in his transformation from deathbed sickly to brilliant young squire.
Ch 4 Promotion - moldyolive5mthCommented
should use single ' quote makes to indicate thought from speach
Edward was shocked. "Yesterday was supposed to be August 9th," he thought. "The day young Edward was supposed to die. But here I am, alive." He closed the door and went back to his room, deep in thought. He wondered why he ended up in a child's body. He considered different reasons, but none made sense. He realized that Hindus and Buddhists might have been right about reincarnation or rebirth. Whatever it was called, it wasn't helping him understand his situation. - moldyolive1yrCommentedCh 9 A Huge Blessing
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I'm certainly no leftist but that's a rather brain rotted caricature.
If I acted like the modern leftist idealists would like me to act and just offered everything I had while baring myself naked for those probably poor people, not only I would betray the trust of my subordinates and militias that they put in me as their leader, I would lose my chance to change the course of the history of my country! - moldyolive1yrCommentedCh 6 Chapter 6
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your population estimate is totally off. we know tywin invaded the river lands with 45,000 soldiers. we also know a middle ages state can't put more that 1% of its population in the field. especially not in a long drawn out foreign campaign. then raise a new army as they take losses. this means the westerlands must have a population of atleat 4.5million. far more likely between 5 and 6 million
Ch 11 Let's Get Down To Business - moldyolive1yrReplied to Jesus_Lasso
I call my mom mother all the time.
'I must not act too much like an adult otherwise it would seem weird, it is safe to show advanced intelligence and great innate talent for basically everything, but I should not overexpose myself. Even towards my own mother.' - moldyolive2yrCommented
this mc is so lame
John smiles at her before saying without thinking, "Yeah, it's fine. I like to see you smile". Amy hearing this compliment blushes a small bit and smiles at John, before suddenly hugging him. Catching herself, she lets go and was about to apologize but she looked up and saw John smiling at her.