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Tenkeneki

Tenkeneki

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My favorite hobby is procrastinating and I have a huge imagination.

2020-11-07 JoinedUnited States
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  • Tenkeneki
    Tenkeneki3yr
    Replied to Tenkeneki

    Also, I feel like I had too many plot holes, but you know what they say, you're your own worst critic.

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    The True Jack of all Trades
    Fantasy · Tenkeneki
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  • Tenkeneki
    Tenkeneki3yr
    Replied to Pimple_Face_13

    Yeah, I know. I tried to get to a point that I planned and unconsciously rushed the story. Although later I tried to slow things down a bit. This is my first novel so I appreciate the criticism.

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    The True Jack of all Trades
    Fantasy · Tenkeneki
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  • Tenkeneki
    Tenkeneki3yr
    Commented

    Gacha be like.

    Looking around, Noah could see hundreds, if not thousands, of people with different types of appearances: women who looked like fairies sporting huge wings, men who looked like big stone golems, beings with bodies made entirely of water. Noah heard that people usually spent money buying cosmetic items that changed the appearance of their characters, but after he learned how expensive these items were, he didn't believe that so many people had spent money on them.
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Tenkeneki
    Tenkeneki3yr
    Posted

    This is my first review so take it easy. This story is one of the best I have ever read. The entire concept, I know, is not new, but the author does put a unique spin on the idea. Having the four horsemen of the apocalypse was a beautiful idea. It's something that should be in more novels. The amount of religious stuff and folklore really taught me a few things. I also like the concept of people. like devout Catholics, being in denial of the gods, it really makes the story seem realistic. The characters are really well written. I like how Lazar's personality is kept static throughout the entire novel. Cold and logical personalities are very common, but I like them so who cares? Anyway, Lazar's relationship with others will most likely need to be worked on. I don't really like the idea of him doing things for his own benefit and pushing people that seem useless away from him(That might be the intention, I have no idea). But all in all, this story is really good :)

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    Bound to Evil
    Urban · Barbare
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