The sentences feels off, I can't exactly pinpoint it as I am not good with grammar either but It just feels off when reading the sentences. It's not unreadable but just off. Hopefully, you will have an editor who can touch up on it. Thanks for the chapters.

How about freaking poison immunity from shop for 24 hours full body?!

He used "Double Jump", so fast at least it didn't seem like 30 seconds passed, a small error on author's part? I will just take it as no cd for double jump or that somehow he was able to buy 30 second time.

Such short chapters..

*Sigh* @Author, I think, you are overdoing with the number of times stats being shown in game in the chapters so far.

While it's true of what you explained in regards to character's reaction. I hope you do realize this is inside a game lol. I am more surprised that people didn't give out money to test out the games mechanics or possible random quest etc from doing this act for a whole week!

"I take out some gold coins" --> Will anyone be able to afford repair cost ? lmfao