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CaptainChaos0301

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hi im dee all my works are going under a rewrite now so i might delete those chapters and/or update them with the rewritten ones.

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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
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    This is VERY good, ngl. The writing style isn't the best but it is VERY good for an online novel. This is a contemporary fantasy romance and I never knew I was going to like it as I'm not that big of a fan of romances in general, good luck to the author on this though, they sound like a very good writer

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    You're a What?!
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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Replied to jazzclover

    You too. Goodluck with your story aswell.

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    Orphan On The Snow
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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Replied to jazzclover

    Thanks :)

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    The Dagger's Reign
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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Posted

    The writing has drastically improved than compared to the previous one I’ve read by this author. I am LOVING it so far (I’m still on the second chapter).

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    I guess i do love you!!!
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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Posted

    This is pretty good for the first story that was ever written by the author, I’ll give you that. The writing could use some improvement, and so does the dialogue. Otherwise, this is a great book. It got me out of my slump so cheers to that, my friend.

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    love or a crush, you tell me
    Anime & Comics · jazzclover
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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Posted

    Love this book, Love this book. Love this book. Love this book. Love this book. That's all I can say without spoiling you. This story is like ATLA and ALOK meet the hunger games and boy am I here for it.

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    Kano Trials
    Fantasy · Armedgames
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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Replied to ky_rine

    I actually picked up the Gods Myths from norse, indian, and greek mythology so ig you can see the similarities. Also TYSM for the positive comments, means a lot to me :)

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    Time & Termination
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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Posted

    Underrated book right here, my dudes. The first paragraph was enough to make me get hooked. I am genuinely impressed. The writing style is similar to a best selling author, and that’s a good thing cuz those books are one of the bests. Why are the best books the most underrated? Idk. I will not hesitate to recommend this. The Characters are also very cool! I honestly want to find constructive criticism to give but even that seems impossible. There are a few issues but those are irrelevant. the plot seems a bit cliche but i swear to non the existent god that this is 𝚠𝚘𝚛𝚝𝚑 𝚒𝚝. Give it a read. And no, I don’t take criticisms for liking this book.

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    ENCLAVE OF KINGS: HEIR'S RETURN
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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Replied to Paper_plane

    oh, i have a heart made out of a diamond. unbreakable. :)

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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Replied to GodlyN

    Heart isnt meat ;-; its something that provides life to non-plants

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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Replied to GodlyN

    I am telling this to not start a war in the comments. I will read the entire novel when you improve, looking forward to that, bro.

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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Replied to GodlyN

    I like your story’s plot but im just dt saying you need to work on your grammar.

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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Replied to GodlyN

    We are friends. not friend. im trying to take you seriously but your grammar doesn’t help.

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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Replied to GodlyN

    Im telling you this so you can improve-

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    Sci-fi · GodlyN
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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Commented

    GET BETTER

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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Commented

    ...again, change your grammar

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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Commented

    STOP SWITCHING TENSES

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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Commented

    your literally using 2 different tenses and clshing them together. no wonder why you have only 1,whateverK reads

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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Commented

    what beating?

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  • CaptainChaos0301
    CaptainChaos03012yr
    Commented

    I have the urge to re-edit this entire book for you. Please get better at your writing

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    Sci-fi · GodlyN
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