Very nice of you to release the extra chapters. Cheers!!!

It's the same content as the last chapter. And Author, please stop doing paragraph recaps in each chapter just to increase word count. It makes me think that you take us as being stupid...

Author, the story has a few similarities to other stories I've read and it could obviously be a lot better. But considering you're just in college, that could be explained.My question is what do the next few months of release plans look like?

Ok, so your brain was dry to end this cliffhanger before the end of the month? There have been 2 days without any new chapters, which means I just exhausted my privilege to get to the end of this.... So basically I have to pay again for privileges next month to get a resolution!

I get it, life is tough, for everyone! But you initially had 20 extra chapters with 500 coins as payment, now it's 44 and it's 1200 coins. I actually enjoy what you write, but 1 chapter/day means I'm investing a lot of money with no return. Also, start increasing the word count, as the chapters were longer before. Nobody is forcing you to write 5000 chapters and why should you??? Try to show progress in the story, not just fillers.

@Author, you used to write 14-18 chapters a week and they actually had some length. What happened?I really enjoyed this book, but you're lengthening it too much with useless repeats or details. Are you planning to have a 5000 chapters book?

Another short chapter that keeps prolonging a cliffhanger...

What the heck? Another cliffhanger?

The Black Plain Empire has a direct border to the Mrine Empire. Why would he go through the Flowers Kingdom??? This doesn't make sense.

Why is it called imprisonment? no one goes to jail. Maybe seclusion would be better?

@Author, are you still writing this book? I see a lot of unfinished novels on your profile, so this doesn't give strong confidence on your grit.

The text at the end is written twice

same chapter as before uploaded, author you need to correct this

There are 3 chapters missing. Why not translate them to finish it with a bang?

you double copied the last half of the chapter

It's basically not worth it to pay for access to advanced chapters because the action moves so slow due to low word count. Quite dissapointing as a writing style.

where are the rest of the chapters from the mini-mass?

this is a repeat of previous chapter. is the author not going to change it?

i saw this coming, there were enough clues given...

Good story, but you need to improve your grammar. Even Google translate works better than this.