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The bloodline? I"m guessing a path to power
Another reason for him to get stronger
At least your not brushing off how traumatised the mc should be with everything that happened.
Overall a pretty decent followup to the prologue I'm wondering where you'll take it from here. You gonna do a time skip anytime soon cos I'm guessing Darius is still a kid tho don't know how old as you didn't say. Either way looking forward to what comes after
Nice, some little hint of whats going on in the stars
Another survivor?
I'm guessing that child is Darius and that would be his mother
So did they all die?
That's the beginning of his journey to power right there feeling helpless and powerless to save himself would be a pretty good motivator for someone to get stronger
Aliens I'm guessing?
Now that was a cool line reminds me of the one from the God Butcher storyline where the All-Black devoured the sun
Nothing more dangerous than a man with nothing left to lose
Is he though? I feel like in a prologue like this, if the story ever reaches this point cos some offers give up long before it ever reaches that point but if it does I reckon it won't be nearly as bad as its made out to be and that there will be some mysterious group of survivors coming to his aid.
Never heard of someone called that before
Written by the victor you mean
Always love ur stories, but hopefully it doesn't take us ages to get back to where the story originally was. Lookng forward to see what new villains u include but again, as long as it doesn't take ages to get back the original point in the story. I'm also glad uve decided to change this to an OC and I'm wondering if u intend to include the elements of the Narutoverse that u had included in the old version.
U do realise this is an actual military tactic used in the ancient world, it was just so insanely difficult and requires certain things to go perfectly to plan. Oberyn, Harry Strickland and Jon Connigton all acted a fixed points, the author even described them as rocks in a lake, I think? These points I’m guessing direct the wave of troops around while Aegon leads a cavalry charge that creates a wave. Honestly it’s pretty similar to the tactic used by Riboku in Kingdom against Duke Hyou, I’m guessing that’s where the author got it from. Also have u even been reading properly, It’s been pointed out that Daenerys doesn’t want to hurt her own people, so that’s why she hasn’t blasted him with dragon fire and so what if Aegon is given plot armour, pretty sure the author did that to give us this battle. It’s actually nice to see Robb meet an equal on the battlefield.