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WaitWhoWhat7hReplied to nexus777You're correcting some things that don't need correcting.
He thought he had failed them all, but he hadn't…he still had Haru and he wouldn't let his guard drop this time.- WaitWhoWhat7hReplied to nexus777
Bruh
He's way too adorbs!!! - WaitWhoWhat7hCommented
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"What the heck fire is this?!?" - WaitWhoWhat8hReplied to MarkOfLife
thousands of years, yeah
[ Name: Fudo D. Yamamoto - WaitWhoWhat10hReplied to Bumbum420
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"Then come on," Apollo said briskly, walking forward under the shade of the trees. He couldn't wait to have some delicious baked fish made by his mother; just thinking about it made his mouth water. - WaitWhoWhat18hReplied to DaoistOfRefresh
That's gross. You need a lot of help.
I couldn't help but feel a bit tense as we entered Ichigo's house. And then it hit me like a truck: are those two Karin and Yuzu? They kinda looked like those filler characters you'd find in the anime, but hey, they're pretty cute. Maybe not Rukia or Orihime level, but definitely a notch above the folks I hang out with at school. - WaitWhoWhat18hReplied to Calleum_Artori
Emotion based thinking would be the downfall of human society unfortunately. It's pretty easily seen in the USA now. Anyway, like I said, I'm just glad he is just a leader of a small group.
It was even worse when that one was someone you knew, a relative, a friend. I'm not a hero, not even a villain; I'm just a normal person, but I would never choose to sacrifice someone I care about, no matter the consequences, I was sure of that. - WaitWhoWhat18hReplied to JSirMixalotL
He doesn't have an inside perspective. It's not true, nor accurate. I understand trying to be nice, but this is a mistake that is simple to fix, but it messes with the order of the story.
Man, this whole situation was getting weirder by the minute. Here I was, in a classroom full of manga characters, chatting with this robotic-sounding system that claimed to give me the powers of a captain-level Shinigami. It was like the ultimate fanboy dream and a surreal nightmare rolled into one. - WaitWhoWhat18hReplied to Soberanoscuro
- WaitWhoWhat2dCommentedCh 25 Battle, conversation, and departure.
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On the grounds that you're capable of it and he wasn't.
He looked me in the eyes and returned with a stoic face, showing no emotion as he waited for my response. The audacity of this guy, asking me for something like that when he himself, Saya's father, didn't protect her; on what grounds did he think he had the right to ask me this? I wouldn't even stay in this world for long, three months to be exact. - WaitWhoWhat2dCommented
I can't say that makes him a bad person, but, like the other guy said, it's good that he doesn't lead many people.
It was even worse when that one was someone you knew, a relative, a friend. I'm not a hero, not even a villain; I'm just a normal person, but I would never choose to sacrifice someone I care about, no matter the consequences, I was sure of that. - WaitWhoWhat3dCommented
Who would stand there for minutes waiting for a response?
Several minutes passed... - WaitWhoWhat3dCommented
That's a pretty long time.
During these two years, Zeng Yi had finally cultivated his soul power to level ten. Once his soul power reached level ten, he would need to hunt Soul Beasts to obtain soul rings in order to continue cultivating. - WaitWhoWhat3dReplied to Chibi_mon_mon
You can also use a scythe for that.
Hmm... a scythe, like the one used for cutting grass. Another waste. - WaitWhoWhat3dReplied to JSirMixalotL
It is incorrect. A captains power means exactly that. The apex of bleach means something else entirely. What happened here is that the author thought he wrote about the system already when he hadn't. It is stated later that he received a captains level of power in his spells.
Man, this whole situation was getting weirder by the minute. Here I was, in a classroom full of manga characters, chatting with this robotic-sounding system that claimed to give me the powers of a captain-level Shinigami. It was like the ultimate fanboy dream and a surreal nightmare rolled into one. - WaitWhoWhat4dReplied to Moulbrfut_futich
There is no point in using "subsequent" in this case. The only reason it would be used here is in an attempt to sound more intelligent. And yes, it is what would be considered a "bigger" word. "Next" would've worked just as well.
Yamahiko dedicated a full day to mastering the grip and initial stance of swordsmanship. On the subsequent day, Renji began teaching him the footwork of swordsmanship. - WaitWhoWhat4dReplied to The_Essence_
Basic English implies that it's the basics. Those 3 words are not basic.
"I do not understand a single thing you just said. But knowing you, it probably means that I'll need to hit him even harder to take him down.." - WaitWhoWhat4dReplied to noobmaster36068493
It doesn't say white.
However, before he could even finish his statement, a long blade was immediately thrust into his throat out of nowhere, while blood spurted out, as his body collapsed to his knees. - WaitWhoWhat4dCommented
"After that" is not a good transition here.
After that, a six-year-old youngster was quickly devouring bread with his dirty hands in a dark lane of rusted dwellings. He was dressed in ragged clothing with numerous tears on it, but his golden hair shone like diamond ore.