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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62441yr
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    After looking through it, I found this is the same work, with a different title. Are you the original author or not? If not, did you get his permission to post it here?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Something's Strange
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    Becoming the King of A New Filthy World
    Fantasy · Alex_morg
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62441yr
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    A novel with an interesting concept, it's just that the character development is too slow, as if you were defusing a 'bomb' that was confirmed to explode, which would make readers judge this novel badly, Beta Mc, etc. Even though Mc (the stupid one) isn't actually a beta, he's just trying to maintain a rational attitude from where he came from. Despite what he's been through, nothing rational, like I said before, he's just stupid, not a beta. I'll just put off reading it again, because it's too boring, if 'bomb defusing' drags on.

    Ch 24 Ch 22: You made a mistake so you should be punished [pt1]
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    The law of Fiction: Harem in the fiction world
    Fantasy · daygonyuuki
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62441yr
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    Next Generation Harlem King!!!! Hahahaha.

    Ch 59 Of Certain Subaru
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    Festering Desire
    Urban · thegrandmagi
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62441yr
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    I know, Yuuto, he is the reincarnation of the Harlem King!!! Ha ha.

    Ch 29 Poor Yuuto
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    Festering Desire
    Urban · thegrandmagi
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
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    A little curious, I saw 'Note, Profane Prince' in the synopsis, and from Xinzi's conversation about Celestials, it reminded me of the story of Profane Prince of Domination. The question is, is this world based on Profane's novel?

    Ch 4 Am I the Antagonist?
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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
    Replied to ZonicZ

    I don't think there's anything wrong with being different, in fact in my view it's good. If it's just following 'standardization', how can it be called 'Fanfic?

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: End of the Tutorial
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    The Gamer System
    Anime & Comics · IamSuperflous
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
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    This is the one I don't understand the 'purpose' of your two novels I read!? Why ignore your sister? Note: this is not a question, just an unsolved mystery! I hope it will be answered in the future.

    Ch 175 Mira left home
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    A Pervert's World
    Fantasy · Slayer104
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
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    'Nobody likes being cheated on.' It was human nature, but they would do so if the opportunity arose. After all, what Amelia did was not included in the 'Netorare' category, it was more inclined to 'Netorase'(Polyamorous). And in addition to the background of the world it is not a big problem (in my opinion), and instead adds a new flavor to the ero-novel concept (which mostly just takes fmc here and there). So in conclusion, I really love this novel. Ha ha ha.....

    Ch 153 Frustrated Aunt
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    A Pervert's World
    Fantasy · Slayer104
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
    Commented

    His name shouldn't be 'King' but 'Foothold'. LoL

    Ch 38 Chapter 38
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    Lewd Apocalypse
    Sci-fi · thegrandmagi
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
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    ahahahaha... I actually laughed out loud reading this!! It feels so fresh, how Ryu 'polluted' his teacher with beautiful ideas and 'art'!! Lol.

    Ch 122 Sophia
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    A Pervert's World
    Fantasy · Slayer104
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
    Replied to Slayer104

    Oh, I see. I wish you all the best from your other amazing work!

    Ch 109 A night with mother
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    A Pervert's World
    Fantasy · Slayer104
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the great chapter! Hmmm, I wanted to ask, are you going to continue your other work on AO3? Or, it becomes an exclusive story?

    Ch 109 A night with mother
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    A Pervert's World
    Fantasy · Slayer104
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
    Replied to Nonameavailable

    I see. A little advice for you, although a little shameless but good for your novel. Make a note at the end of the chapter, so that readers can vote for your novel. Because I see almost all of your works sink to the bottom. It's a shame that no one reads such a good work.

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    Infinite Ladder - The War of Gods
    Sci-fi · Nonameavailable
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
    Commented

    Is this the start of the Infinite Ladder series?

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    Infinite Ladder - The War of Gods
    Sci-fi · Nonameavailable
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
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    I wonder, will there ever be a time when Riel will show his true nature to his family? Like, when he killed the slave dealers without batting an eye? I know this won't be answered, but it still makes me curious.

    Ch 59 Lovestruck Eyes
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    Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
    Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
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    I want an answer! Are you 'Tento'?

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Womanizer in another world
    Anime & Comics · Binirubukuro
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
    Commented

    The perspective is not balanced, sometimes changing from first person to third person perspective. I don't know why the readers haven't told you. even though it will make the author grow if corrected.

    Ch 4 Chapter 4 - Drilling mummy Ayaka (216 months +)
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    Bugs Bunny sent me to BNHA world
    Anime & Comics · MrJabra
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
    Commented

    you must add the tags Drama, hurt comfort, romance, and anxiety disorder. I know, you don't like some readers on webnovel (because in webnovel most of them are beta readers). But I think there is a bit of fault with you too, you wrote about someone suffering from Anxiety Syndrome and coitophobia, in the first person perspective, I would suggest writing in the third person perspective. The reason is, not many people enjoy reading Mc's inner thoughts. I suggest you read some on AO3 (if you haven't already). There, many professional writers will motivate you. Also, put your work there, I'm sure your writing will thrive! The readers there are amazing!!

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: This Is More Than I Can Take
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    Even if I am an Ugly Bastard I want to be a good person (English)
    Anime & Comics · Bukaro
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
    Replied to Hancock_Sama

    well, that's fine. Thank you for clearing up my misunderstanding.

    Ch 3 3. New World
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    Sunshine in apocalypse(Escanor)
    Book&Literature · Hancock_Sama
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  • Afif_6244
    Afif_62442yr
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    You know, possessiveness is fine. As long as you understand the limits. Example: you may limit the lives of your girls, as long as it's for the convenience of both of you. If it's just for your own convenience, they are nothing more than slaves/robots. And, I didn't see the Romance tag, but I was expecting a relationship development, not PokeWoman.

    Ch 3 3. New World
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    Sunshine in apocalypse(Escanor)
    Book&Literature · Hancock_Sama
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