Valman
Shout little shadow of pain, I'm here to help you run away from these angels and demons So follow me to our paradise
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En faite le noyau d'un bot et aussi importante que l'étincelle si celui-ci est touché tu peu en mourir de blessure importante donc si il en trouve un bon sachant que un bon est cher normal qu'il remplace le sien
But your book is so good!
Well, already the book is great I only criticize it because I am a writer who likes to find some small flaw, I find the book a little slow but you get attached to the characters quickly so it's not a flaw, relationships and behaviors are well managed .... but after seeing that I go from an investigative book to a quiet book knows its cheek
So what I have to say, the writer asked me to read his book, I find the writing and the story special but unfortunately I do not put all the points because the beginning and long !!! The beginning is so long that you don't even want to read the rest yet the rest is better than the beginning! Otherwise read this book if you have the time
I love it, write at your own pace and tampis for those who can't wait
It's a good start, I'll wait for the rest and read it to see the deepest part of your darkness