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Valman

Valman

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Shout little shadow of pain, I'm here to help you run away from these angels and demons So follow me to our paradise

2020-10-31 JoinedFrance
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  • Valman
    Valman1yr
    Replied to ppp999

    En faite le noyau d'un bot et aussi importante que l'étincelle si celui-ci est touché tu peu en mourir de blessure importante donc si il en trouve un bon sachant que un bon est cher normal qu'il remplace le sien

    [Would the host like to replace his old core with the Warp core?]
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    Reincarnated Into A Transformer In Cybertron With A System
    Sci-fi · GodsAre_Stupid
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  • Valman
    Valman2yr
    Commented

    it's cool

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: 2020 Redo
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    Human Cultivation
    Horror · Prince_nonchalant
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Commented

    But your book is so good!

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    Unraveling Despair
    Urban · XXXXC
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Replied to niddaii27

    Tanks

    altalt
    Lir Gore Hotel
    Horror · Valman
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Replied to Not_Active

    You probably like it because it mixes several genres and it shows some hard truth

    altalt
    Lir Gore Hotel
    Horror · Valman
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Replied to livefree

    Thank you very much for giving me your opinion and yes I make a lot of mistakes

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    Lir Gore Hotel
    Horror · Valman
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Posted

    Valarie is a good book but the magic is not very present for the moment nor the lover I still give it a good mark because it improved in the more distant chapters

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    Find on Anystories!
    Fantasy · Not_Active
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Replied to livefree

    I'm Valman and discord XD

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    Wizard World:Struggles of dimensions
    Fantasy · livefree
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Replied to livefree

    Will have to already talk about the type of magic you want in your book because I can give you tons of it but if it's a destructive thing and you do a good thing ... it does not work even with the most great goodness of the world

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    Wizard World:Struggles of dimensions
    Fantasy · livefree
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Posted

    It's a very good story, the only flaw I find in it is its slowness and its magic that I have the impression that we show in a hurry after it's my opinion, maybe you find yourself that it's too magical but I find that it's not magical enough and that it should go deeper into it

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    Wizard World:Struggles of dimensions
    Fantasy · livefree
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Commented

    There could be some drama or something unforeseen that you never will think about later (This is how I write my stories)

    Ch 19 Back and Forth
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    About Last Night!
    Urban · Lady_Djarin
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Posted

    As usual I have to look for flaws in the books and this flaw is the very long prologue but after that you get very attached to the characters and the world around them so here is what I think, superb book to read afterwards a hard day or after a boring day

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    Golden Dragon Merchant Group
    Eastern · OmniFrog
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Replied to Lady_Djarin

    thank you very much for all your compliments

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    Lir Gore Hotel
    Horror · Valman
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Posted

    Well, already the book is great I only criticize it because I am a writer who likes to find some small flaw, I find the book a little slow but you get attached to the characters quickly so it's not a flaw, relationships and behaviors are well managed .... but after seeing that I go from an investigative book to a quiet book knows its cheek

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    About Last Night!
    Urban · Lady_Djarin
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Commented

    I read all your chapters! go on like this

    Ch 51 The Second Victim (I)
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    Ten Darkest Secrets (Betrayer Series Book #1)
    Urban · bibiyenini
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Posted

    So what I have to say, the writer asked me to read his book, I find the writing and the story special but unfortunately I do not put all the points because the beginning and long !!! The beginning is so long that you don't even want to read the rest yet the rest is better than the beginning! Otherwise read this book if you have the time

    altalt
    Ten Darkest Secrets (Betrayer Series Book #1)
    Urban · bibiyenini
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Commented

    I love it, write at your own pace and tampis for those who can't wait

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    Unraveling Despair
    Urban · XXXXC
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Replied to XXXXC

    Thank you very much for your opinion [img=recommend]

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    Lir Gore Hotel
    Horror · Valman
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Commented

    It's a good start, I'll wait for the rest and read it to see the deepest part of your darkness

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    Unraveling Despair
    Urban · XXXXC
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  • Valman
    Valman3yr
    Replied to Lady_Djarin

    My book is about demons, I put all my heart into it but I have the impression that no one will like my book: Lir gore hotel But thanks anyway [img=recommend]

    Ch 16 Cold Shoulder and Daddy
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    About Last Night!
    Urban · Lady_Djarin
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