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Praefactuss

Praefactuss

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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss2yr
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    Start was solid, gave a small peek at what the hardships/problems that the MC will have later on. I'm curious as to how the story will proceed, can't wait to read more.

    Elspeth: Queen of Wolves
    Fantasy · Monachre
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss2yr
    Replied to Praefactuss

    Oh my bad, its for UK monarchies, which my monarchy is based out of, not british monarchies.

    "From now on, you aren't Ladies or Lords or Honourables. You are students of Froelia Royal Academy and I expect that you act like one. Understood?" She asked.
    Transmigrated Mind
    Fantasy · Praefactuss
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss2yr
    Replied to Nathos_TheOnly

    That would be for now. However, for old british monarchies, honourable was used for children of barons. They would normally be called "The Hons" or "Honourables" since Lady and Sir was used for higher ranking nobles

    "From now on, you aren't Ladies or Lords or Honourables. You are students of Froelia Royal Academy and I expect that you act like one. Understood?" She asked.
    Transmigrated Mind
    Fantasy · Praefactuss
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss2yr
    Replied to LunarEcho

    My bad! Thanks for pointing that out, I fixed everything up till the most recent chapter

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    Transmigrated Mind
    Fantasy · Praefactuss
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss2yr
    Replied to Ashley7Black

    I made a mistake in just including his age in the synopsis and the latter chapters but his real age is 28!

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    Transmigrated Mind
    Fantasy · Praefactuss
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss2yr
    Replied to Ashley7Black

    Hehehe, it shows that they aren't that close

    My family wasn't poor, in fact they're very wealthy. They would just buy the cheapest things of what I want just to get me to move out, but they don't know how persistent I can be. Even my clothes were branded and pretty expensive since they wanted me to give people a good impression of our family, I just haven't worn them that much since I haven't gone out.
    Transmigrated Mind
    Fantasy · Praefactuss
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss2yr
    Posted

    I can see the world building and it was what hooked me. However, there were spots where I got confused on who's talking and what was happening. Also the lack of names make it feel like every other person except for the MC is unimportant and just some background character. The plot has potential although the writing could use some work. It's a great sci-fi fantasy mix and would love to read more in the future.

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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss2yr
    Commented

    Hmm, you keep using "soon enough", probably better if you try to limit that.

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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss2yr
    Posted

    I had a hard time understanding the story at first. The only way I could understand was because of the title and synopsis. Maybe you can work around being more clear in the story and more descriptive about what happened. The characters are likeable since they seem to be really good friends and are very open to one another. All in all, it's still an interesting story and it keeps me thinking about how getting transported to another world changed ryan so drastically. Keep up the good work!

    Human Liam and Werewolf Ryan
    Sci-fi · Ashley7Black
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss2yr
    Replied to Monarch_Of_Death

    My bad! I meant to write it that way and totally forgot to read back. I was too focused on creating the ending of the chapter that I overlooked it! Thank you for reminding me!

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    Transmigrated Mind
    Fantasy · Praefactuss
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss3yr
    Posted

    It's a very light and fun read. Although the grammar can use a bit of work, but I can understand if it's not your first language. All in all, fun to read and looking forward to the story development. I got confused with the spacing at the first chapter but it got better as I read it. Keep up the good work!

    You're The First And The Last
    Teen · rzasrsna
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss3yr
    Posted

    It was a good story, but it was hard to read because the lack of spacing. I recommend cutting your paragraphs. Also add more word counts to your chapter since I feel like reading just a bit and it ending abruptly would be bad.

    Empty promises:HOPE
    Fantasy · Omahakhan
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss3yr
    Posted

    It's a good read, although I would prefer some more context on how the magic worked. The protag is cunning and smart and makes use of his knowledge from the future. I wish we could find out more about the protag himself from before he became Samuel and the things he did. It might help make this image of a smart and cunning Samuel more concrete. Other than those, I love the dialogue and the interaction between the characters. It's also nice to seem some bits of action at the start of the story!

    Aristocrat to Adventurer
    Fantasy · US_DreamerDon
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss3yr
    Posted

    Female lead's personality is engaging and the story is okay albeit confusing to read when it swaps POV from the protag to the person watching the screen. I like the story and how it is progressing. One tip would be to make the system choices a lil bit cleaner to make it easier to read! Other than that overall good read!

    Mission Impossible: Love Is Possible
    Fantasy · Bird_Of_Paradise
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss3yr
    Posted

    Very cute story. It's a breather from all the heavy stories here in the site. Read this if you want a light-hearted story that makes you smile with the scenes and the story!

    UFO Prince, I'm Your Delicious Princess
    Fantasy · GCarre
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss3yr
    Posted

    Amazing read, I love how descriptive the scenes are. It hooked me and let me feel relatable with the MC. I can feel the emotions and actually feel like Im there as an observer! Keep it up!

    I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.
    Fantasy · Andry_Reyes
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss3yr
    Commented

    This hooked me, great writing!

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    I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.
    Fantasy · Andry_Reyes
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  • Praefactuss
    Praefactuss3yr
    Replied to Andry_Reyes

    Thanks! Im trying to keep it looking neat and clean as much as possible!

    Ch 1 The First Day
    Transmigrated Mind
    Fantasy · Praefactuss
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