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main character buff... nothing new... Just kidding. His built body was possible only cause of his gift. as for dodging the cctv's I haven't shown much of his training days at Seven's base but I was planning to mention them in volume 2. Yup definitely planned it...
that's facts LMAO
it's a phase... it shall pass.
thanks for informing It was my mistake '×-×-×' is used when POV changes or scenes changes.
yes they do but but our mc is using dagger so he doesn't use them as much , also it consumes mana which is why instead of basic attacks , he goes with magic skills
never forget the classics.
Okay just going to clear it here for the readers who are confused by why there's a cooldown in real life. Right now the MC has low mana and when mana reaches rock bottom which means zero the MC could die. Overusing a skill at his level will drain all of his mana , so to prevent this from happening cooldown have been introduced. Also skill doesn't show mana consumption cause MC's level is too low for that. Peace.
So we're 50 chapters in , I've focused on the character's emotional development in these chapters. The MC is confused with what to do , what is right , why should he get up and live. So I tried to give answers to those questions in these chapters. I personally think that the story get better after chapter 20 so I hope you'll read till 20. Writing Quality : I'm a noob at writing the first few chapters have many grammatical mistakes , all I can say is bare with them for now. I only get few hours to write as I'm prepping for my exams , I plan to edit them in future tho when I'm a lot better at writing. World Development : if you've read till the latest chapters you know a lot is happening , I like it when there's a lot going on at the same time. You're welcome to give me any kind of suggestions , please give me any suggestions you've. Characters : MC is said to be a genius but I still haven't mentioned what his strong points are so stay tuned for that. The side characters will not have much interactions with the MC , for now atleast.(I'm only talking about beta testers here)
think of it like this when the mid was unawakened it had a type of shield or trigger after getting damaged it awakened. also this happens with every player the first time they encounter Mid-Garfon
guess I overdid with extra details I'll keep that in mind.
about those skill panels I'm doing less of them now and shortened version but it's after the update hope you read till then